高中英语 Module 6 Animals in Danger 写作园地教学案 外研版必修5-外研版高二必修5英语教学案VIP专享

写作园地说明文：描写动物[感悟范文]请根据下列提示写一篇关于蛇的短文。1．蛇是一种生活在草丛或阴暗地方的爬行动物；2．蛇的颜色多样，天敌很难发现；3．蛇的食物很多，比如老鼠、麻雀、鸟蛋等等；4．蛇样子可怕但是用处很多。注意：1.根据内容适当增加细节；2．词数 120～150。 [精彩范文]①The snake is a long and thin animal that lives in grass or other dark places.②Snakes usually have green, yellow or black skins, making it difficult for their enemies to find them.③Snakes can take many things as food, such as mice, sparrows, frogs, birds' eggs, pests and so on.④Although snakes have no legs or feet, they can move very fast on their stomachs. ⑤Some kinds of snakes live in water, where they can swim as freely as fish.⑥As snakes are dreadfullooking, people are afraid of them. ⑦Many people drive them away whenever they see snakes. ⑧However, snakes are not as dreadful as they look. ⑨They can help us to kill mice and pests. ⑩Also, they can provide us with delicious meat and their blood is a good drink. ⑪Poisonous snakes are especially useful, with which we can make valuable drugs.亮点分析：1．文中多处用到含有定语从句的复合句，简洁得体。2．非谓语动词短语 making it ... 作状语使句式变得灵活多样。3．such as, and so on 等短语的运用地道得当。4．运用连词 although, as 和 whenever，使句式复杂，提升文章档次。5．副词“however”及“also”的运用使句子之间的衔接更加自然。[技法讨论]本模块的写作任务是动物描写。描写动物的书面表达属于事物介绍类说明文，以“说明”为主要表达方式，用来介绍动物的类属、生活习性、生存状态、外貌特征等，可对描述的对象作总体概括介绍，给人以直观的总体认识，然后进行具体说明，使人全面深入地了解此种动物。事物介绍类说明文多用一般现在时。写文章时要注意行文的条理清晰，不能东一句、西一笔，缺乏章法。在动笔之前要安排好描述顺序，考虑好句与句之间的衔接、段与段之间的联系，并注意以下几点：11．要抓住事物特征描写事物要紧紧围绕事物的特...