2008 高考英语作文备考教案Ⅰ. NMET 书面表达第五项要求1. 覆盖所有的语言要点。 内容要点可用不同方式表达。对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。2. 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性。值得注意的是语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误, 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致; 具备较强的语言运用能力。3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。Ⅱ. 常见的不足1 汉语式英语2 无过渡语3 句式单一,平铺直叙Ⅲ. 如何增强书面表达效果使用较高级的词汇使用恰当的连接词使用较丰富的句式一、怎样使用较高级的词汇1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.2. We all think he is a great man.3. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4. The students there needn’t pay for their books.5. As a result the plan was a failure.6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.7. She went to Austria in order to study music. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.10. You can find my house easily. 二、怎样使用恰当的连接词连接词使文章语意通顺，前后衔接紧密，可采用以下方法：提示 1：恰当使用关联词，如 when，so，if，because，so that 等。提示 2：巧妙使用意思有联系的词或短语，如 First, Second, Third, Soon, What’s more, As a result 等。提示 3：适当使用过渡性语句，如 The reasons are as follows./Every coin has two sides./On the other hand,/On the contrary,Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. ( 2007 全国 I)First, she can make some pocket money to meet pet daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. Second, she can learn how to deal with various problems in the workplace. Third, she can build up new friendships and improve bet social skills. (2007 陕西)用心 爱心 专心 115 号编辑In my opinion, learning English is a step-by-step process. (2007 浙江)连接词、句型的选择1、递进...
