《志鸿全优设计》2013-2014学年高中英语 Module1OurBodyandHealthyHabitsSectionⅣ目标导学 外研版必修2

Module 1 Our Body and Healthy HabitsSection Ⅳ Writing写作指导一、佳作展示与背诵请根据下面表格中的内容，以“The ways to keep healthy”为题写一篇英语短文。四要四不要1.要多吃水果、蔬菜1.不要吃含脂肪、糖和盐过多的食物2.要坚持每天吃早餐2.不要空腹上班、上学3.要有足够的休息时间3.不要太劳累、不要熬夜4.要勤锻炼4.不要长时间坐着、站着注意：1.短文须包括表格中所有要点，也可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．词数：120 左右。One possible version：The ways to keep healthy“Health is wealth.”Here is some advice on how to keep healthy in our daily life.First，you should have a healthy diet.It's necessary to eat enough fresh vegetables and fruit.But don't eat anything too fatty ， too sweet or too salty.Second，rem ember having breakfast is very important and it can provid e you with energy.You mustn't go to work or school without breakfast.Good habits can help you keep healthy.Don't sit or stand for long.Doing exercise regularly is a good way to make you healthy.After a day's work or study ， enough sleep is necessary.And you shouldn't stay up late.Keeping the balance between work and play will also help you stay fit.Follow the advice，and you will keep healthy.二、思路点拨1．该短文题目为 The ways to keep healthy，以 Do's and Don'ts 形式呈现。短文体裁为说明文，时态应以一般现在时为主。2．全文可按“总—分—总”结构布局，分四个自然段：第一段：开门见山点出主题。第二段：保持健康要养成良好的饮食习惯。第三段：保持健康要养成良好的生活、工作习惯。第四段：总结全文，重申主题，前后呼应。3．词汇短语：关于饮食方面的词汇：a healthy/balanced diet，fresh vegetables and fruit，fat，sugar，fatty ，salty，sweet，peas，potatoes ，bread ，rice，vitamin B and vitamin C．..良好 的生活习惯：good habits，do more exercise，give up smoking，not drink strong coffee，not overwork，keep away from，stay/keep healthy，stay in good health，keep fit...承接词汇：firs t，second，but，and...4．句型：Here is some advice on how to...In order to stay healthy，it is important to have a balanced diet.It is necessary to do...You'd better do...三、经典句式1．It's necessary to eat enough fresh vegetables and fruit.句中 it 为形式主语，真正的主语为动词不定式 to eat enough...。2．Doing exercise regularly is a good way to make you healthy.doing exercise regularly 为动词ing 短语，在句中作主语，起名词的作用。3．Follow the advice，and you will keep healthy.本句是祈使句＋and/or 结构，也是本模块所学的句式结构，希望能学以致用。 提示：用最精练的语言把你当堂掌握的核心知识的精华部分和基本技能的要领部分写下来并进行识记。12