【创新设计】2013高中英语 教师用书1 Unit 1 School life 牛津译林版必修1（江苏专用）

Unit 1 School life晨读在线1．假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文：简要描述右图内容，并点明主题；2．联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示。注意：1. 词数不少于 120 个；2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【范文欣赏】 请进行完形填空(每空一词)One drop of water easily disappears，while the sea will never dry up；billions of drops form a river，and all rivers run into the sea. 1. One tree cannot stop the fierce sand storm or conserve water and soil，but the forest is composed of millions of trees，2. which can give creatures a home. One person's ability is limited，3. but human society has endless wisdom. And the masses have great creative power.4. In a word，unity is strength.5. The/This picture is simple but very instructive. It tells us a truth 6. that society consists of individuals and individuals live in society. We are a huge family. Just 7. as a proverb goes，united we stand，divided we fall. Therefore，we should work together and try 8. our best to make a contribution to human society. (133 words)【名师点评】 第一段对图画的内容进行了简单的描述，并点明了主题：团结就是力量(Unity is strength)。第二段联系实际并表达了该图给我们的启示：团结则立，分裂则废(United we stand，divided we fall)。文章层次清楚，内容符合题目要求。两个非限制性定语从句 which can give creatures a home/Just as a proverb goes 以及一个同位语从句 that society consists of individuals and individuals live in society 的正确使用，体现了作者扎实的语言基本功。高级词汇 fierce，conserve，be composed of，instructive，consist of，individual，proverb，contribution 等的运用恰到好处。连接词 in a word，therefore 的使用让文章过渡自然。文章中最长的句子 28 个词，最短的 5 个词，长短句结合使语言在句式的变换中增强了表现力。文中的两句谚语，足以证明作者平时对语言的积累程度。总之，该文语言流畅、有文采、有思想。这么优秀的作文，阅卷老师...