【志鸿全优设计】2013-2014学年高中英语 Unit5NelsonMandelaamodernheroSectionⅣ目标导学 新人教版必修1

Unit 5 Nelson Mandela—a modern heroSection Ⅳ Writing写作指导一、佳作展示与背诵假设你校英语沙龙论坛正在开展主题为“我最喜欢的名人”的征文活动。请你按照以下提示写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。约翰·列侬(John Lennon)人物简介1940 年 10 月 9 日——1980 年 11 月 8 日；英国著名摇滚乐队“披头士”(the Beatles)成员。主要成就音乐家摇滚史上最伟大的音乐家之一；一生创作并演唱了许多经典的摇滚歌曲。和平主义者宣扬和平，反对战争；代表作 Give Peace a Chance.注意：1．100 词左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．参考词汇：经典作品 classic。One of my favorite a rtists is John Lennon，a member of the Beatles.He was born on October 9,1940 and died on November 8,1980.He is one of the most famous rock musicians ever.Lennon wrote and reordered many songs in his life，most of which are now rock classic.Lennon is also known as a peace activist.His most famous song is Give Peace a Chance，in which he asks his listeners to imagine a world without war and violence.He realizes that many people may think he is a dreamer，but he hopes everyone will join him in the dream.二、思路点拨人物介绍属于说明文，写作时要围绕人物组织材料。写作时应注意：1．仔细审题，确定主题。2．合理安排短文的结构层次，组织好所提示内容表达的先后顺序。3．句子时态要在上下文中有相关性、连续性，要与表达内容相一致。叙述过去的事情时要用过去时态，但也可以用其他时态。4．审题后要先列出简明扼要的提纲，以免漏掉要点。5．由于是人物介绍，故应用第三人称来写。常用句型有：Sb. is considered to be one of the greatest...Wellknown as...，he/she...Born in a poor family，he/she had to...When he was a small child，he/she showed a great interest in...He/She was praised/honoured/remembered as...He/She devoted himself(herself)to...，and made great contributions to...From...to...，he(she)first worked as...，and then he(she)became...三、经典句式1．Lennon wrote and reordered many songs in his life，most of which are now rock classic.本句使用了 most of which 引导的非限制性定语从句。2 ． His most famous song is Give Peace a Chance ， in which he asks his listeners to imagine a world without war and violence.本句使用了 in which 引导的定语从句。 提示：用最精炼的语言把你当堂掌握的核心知识的精华部分和基本技能的要领部分写下来并进行识记。1