河南省灵宝市第三高级中学 2013-2014 学年高二英语导学案 30：Unit16.Writing A Day When Everything Went Wrong年级：高二 学科：英语 设计人：陈巧妮 审核人：张红 编号：30Step Ⅰ Lead in Do you love stories?What factors should be included in a story? What who where whenStep Ⅱ ReadingTask 1. What will you write about when you see the title A Day When Everything Went Wrong?You can write about every bad thing you have experienced, such as losing something important, hurting your leg, being late for school, failing an examTask 2. Read Draft A of a student's composition on the topic A Day When Everything Went Wrong. Question: How many events are mentioned in the story?1. I Walked to school; 2. I forgot the poetry competition 3. I came last in the poetry reading competition; 4. I spilled water on my pillow Read Draft A and find the other factors of the storyWhy: No school bus; not prepared the competitionFeelings: Tiresome; awkwardTask 3. Read Draft B and C to tell which one is better. What does the writer add in Draft C?In Draft B, the writer uses linking words and adds some details and specific information to attract the attention of the reader. Besides, the order of events is clearer and the language is more vivid. Linking words11. 并列 and, both…and , not only…but also…, as well as, neither…nor…, Either…or…,转折 but, however, yet, though 4. 因果 so, because , as a result, therefore,5. 时间 when, while, as, since, until, till, as soon as, no sooner…than, hardly…when, the instant/minute/second/moment, before, after, every/each time, at the same time, meanwhile 5. 目的 in order to, so as to, so that, in order that 6. 其他 suddenly, unfortunately, so…that… , first, in the end, on the one hand…on the other hand, StepⅢ. Homework Write what happened on your way to school in your reference book, P38.Layout introduction beginning of the narrative development of the narrative conclusion______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2
