湖南省湘潭凤凰中学 2015 届高三英语 Improvement of writing from the perspective of comment on routine writing 复习学案学习现状：写过很多作文，依然写不出好句子。原因分析：长期以来，作文重前期指导，轻后期点评。写作后的评析较笼统，我们单独与老师进行精细面批的机会较少，领会不了老师的书面批改意图，也没有系统梳理过自身错误。以至于长时间写作水平无法提高。学习目标：通过合作学习，反思探究，结合本次作文评析，梳理出自身作文中的典型错误、可雕琢词句，进一步提升写作技能。学习重点：定语从句、非谓语动词等高级句式在作文中的运用。学习难点：如何将定语从句、非谓语动词等高级句式运用至作文。Lead-inLet’s appreciate a composition written by one student.Step one write correct sentencesStep (1) 改错句，谁最快 1. I hope my suggest can help you. (陈泉来) 2. As long as you try your best, you will success.(郭倩云) 错误类型 1：3. I want provide some suggestions for you.(左文权) 4. I intend tell you. (肖剑锋) 5. There have some advice for you.(李维纳) 1Directions: write an English composition according to the instructions given below.假如你是李华，你的好朋友张军在来信中向你倾诉了他的烦恼。由于要代表学校参加游泳比赛，他的压力很大。请用英语给他写一封回信，就如何减轻压力，提出至少三条合理的建议并说明理由。错误类型 2：6. I’m try to solve your problem more than you can help.(赵桓鑫) 7. When I felt pressure, I usually listen to some light music.(朱婵) 错误类型 3：8. Everyone have some troubles in our life.(赵桓鑫) 9. School choose you to take part in competition.(包赞娟) 错误类型 4：Step (2) 考考你 我认为你可以取得好成绩。 _____________________________________________ ____________Step two write proper sentencesStep (1) analyze我认为你可以取得好成绩。 I think you can get good grades. _____________________________________Step (2) Conclude：Step (3) practice1.It is necessary for you to keep great sleeping.(王翠婉) 2.You can also talk with your...
