高考英语 Be Independent or Obey Your Parents 英语书面表达写作指导 你班上周就子女教育问题开了一个家长会。学生和家长们就"家长是否应该对子女的行为严格约束"展开了讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息,写一篇文章客观地介绍讨论结果,并将其发表在校园网"Students’ Hotline"栏目上。词数:150 左右。父母派学生派1. 孩子的是非观不明确，需要家长引导；2. 家长能提供有效的经验帮助孩子少走弯路；3. 信息科技十分发达但良莠不齐，需要家长监督。1. 家长的经验并不完全符合学生实际；2. 孩子应该勇于尝试，敢于挑战，为进入社会做准备；3. 父母与子女之间也该增强信任，给孩子更多自由创造的机会和空间。写作分析:第一步,认真审题,提炼要点。 一审体裁:本次写作任务要求介绍讨论结果,属于议论文体裁写作。 二审结构:文章可分为两部分。首先,引出话题,介绍讨论的问题是什么,以引出下文。其次,客观地阐述讨论结果。具体到本次写作任务,应该分别论述"父母派"和"学生派"的观点。 三审要点:用英语思维,理出写作要点。1. take part in a discussion2. guide children3. offer children experience4. bad information on the Internet5. parents’ experience6. grasp each opportunity7. have confidence in第二步,紧扣主题,扩点成句。1. Students in our class invited their parents to take part in a discussion.2. Many parents think they should guide children.3. Parents can offer children experience.4. There is much bad information on the Internet.5. Parents’ experience isn’t always practical.6. Children should try to grasp each opportunity.7. Children hope that their parents can have confidence in them.第三步,补充修改,连句成篇。范文一:Recently, students in our class invited their parents to take part in a discussion, the topic of which is whether parents should monitor their children’s behavior.Opinions are divided on the topic. Many parents insist that they should focus their attention on their children’s behavior. They think they should guide children because children often don’t know what is right or what...
