高考英语 My Pocket Money 英语书面表达写作指导 假如你是某国际学校记者站的小记者,你校以"How I Spend My Pocket Money"为题向全校学生做问卷调查,结果如以下表格所示。请你写一篇文章分析该调查结果反映的问题并给出你的建议,发表在校英文网站上。词数:120 左右。项目花费(元/月)占每月总支出百分比书籍1512.5％文具108.3％服装5041.7％[零食2016.7％娱乐2520.8％合计120100％写作分析:第一步,认真审题,提炼要点。 一审体裁:本次写作任务为说明文体裁写作。 二审结构:文章可分为三部分。首先,简要交代关于问卷调查的一些情况,如调查的内容和结果等,以引出写作的主题。然后,结合表格中的数据分析调查结果反映的问题。最后,根据反映的问题给出自己的建议。 三审要点:用英语思维,理出写作要点。1. spend 120 yuan of pocket money2. don’t spend much on books and stationery3. lead to serious problems4. pursue material comforts5. help the students spend money reasonably6. their parents and teachers第二步,紧扣主题,扩点成句。1. A high school student spends 120 yuan of pocket money per month on average.2. They don’t spend much on books and stationery.3. Students spend too much money on clothing and snacks, which could lead to serious problems.4. They may learn to pursue material comforts.5. For the sake of helping the students spend money reasonably ...6. Their parents and teachers should teach them what is important and how to spend money properly.第三步,补充修改,连句成篇。范文 1:Nowadays a high school student spends 120 yuan of pocket money per month on average. Almost half of the money is spent on clothing. And the money spent on amusement and snacks takes up 20.8% and 16.7% of the 120 yuan respectively. However, they don’t spend much on books and stationery.Obviously, students spend too much money on clothing and snacks, which could lead to serious problems. For example, they may learn to pursue material comforts and compare clothi...
