高考英语书面表达阅卷教师点评与范文1.(北京卷) 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于 60 提示词：郊区 suburbs 专家范文Green Action in Our Cla April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment. 点评：在写作情景作文的时候，我们要注意合理利用题目要求中的信息。如果开篇直接翻译题目要求：“I am Li Hua from Hongxing High School. To answer the call of ‘green action for our nation’…”, 叙述就会显得生硬死板。Teens 外国专家在此处先简要概括了自己对这次植树活动的总体感受。然后紧紧抓住画面展现的内容依次展开叙述。最后一段的合理联想，更为文章增色不少：Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment. 此外，同学们在欣赏文章的过程中，还要注意体会文中现在分词的各种用法，如：a board reminding people to protect trees 等。2.(浙江卷) 5 月 1 日，高二（3）班的学生志愿者 Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）开展志愿者活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则 100–120 个词的新闻报道。1. 时间、地点、任务、活动；2. 老人们的反应；3. 简短评论。注意：报道的标题和...
