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作文（一）Luxurious Buildings On Campus1. 近年来，一些大学建起豪华楼舍来提升形象；2. 有人赞同，有人反对；3. 谈谈你的观点。【范文】With a view to improving their image and comprehensive strength, many universities are rushing to build luxurious constructions. Some people are in favor of this trend, because the considerably more comfortable environment could let students apply themselves to academic studies. The others who hold the opposite opinion think it not only wastes money but also disturbs the normal teaching activities. Generally speaking, newly-built blocks help to meet the increasingly demanding requirements of the modern students. But with the breakdown of heaps of age-old buildings, their original historic significances would disappear. Most importantly, the trend towards luxury shows the commercialization of college education, which gives negative influence on students. Therefore, I strongly hope universities could attach more attention to the construction of specialties and improvement of their cultural connotation, attracting students by their excellent teaching qualities and research achievements. 【点评】 首段直接点题，说明现象；第二段分述人们对此现象各持己见；第三段陈述自己的观点 ，并提出建议。 范文首段提出大学楼舍“豪华风”这一普遍现象；第二段指出赞同者认为舒适的环境能让学生更好地投入学业中，反对者认为这不仅浪费钱，而且扰乱了正常教学活动；第三段给出自己的观点---旧楼的拆除破坏了校园原有的历史意义；奢华的趋势使得大学教育商业化，给大学生带来负面影响。最后提出建议，希望大学能注重提高自身的文化内涵，加强学科建设。 第一段中 With a view to 意为“为了”，后面接 v.-ing；第二段中 apply themselves to academic studies 意为“全身心投入学业”；第三段中 construction of specialties 意为“专业队伍的建设”，improvement of their cultural connotation 意为“提高自身文化内涵”。作文（二）On Buying Gr...