SectionⅤWriting今昔对比类电子邮件文体感知描写今昔对比时要根据过去的情况和现在的事实组织材料。这类书面表达的一般写作格式为：1．开头提出主题句(提出什么事情发生了变化)2．对过去情况的描述(用过去时态，主要是一般过去时)3．对现在情况的描述(用现在时态，主要是一般现在时)4．总结句增分佳句1．Ourschool/hometown,asallmayknow,isnotwhatitusedtobe.2．Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninthelastfiveyears.3．Twonewbuildingshavebeenbuiltandareinuse.4．Now,alargenumberoftreeshavebeenplanted,whichholdthesoilandwater.5．Ibelievethatthelifeofthepeasantswillgetbetterandbetter.写作模板DearLucy，Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutthechangesin________(地点)．Asisknowntoall,greatchangeshavetakenplacein________(地点)．Itisnolongerwhatitusedtobe________(时间)yearsago,whentherewas________(描写过去的情况)．Nowithaschangedalot.________(描写现在的情况)What’smore/Besides，________(描写现在的情况)．Ibelieve________willbecomebetterandbetter.Ihopeyoucanvisit.写作要求假如你是李华，2019年春节回家过年的时候发现离开了五年的家乡变化很大。请你给朋友Linda写一封电子邮件，告诉她这里的变化。要点：1.建起许多高楼，城市更加漂亮了；2．私家车拥有量增加，人们生活水平提高了；3．可以品尝世界各地的美食，如美国、意大利、韩国等地的美食；4．与人联系更加方便，如发电子邮件。词数：100左右。参考词汇：立交桥overpass;私家车privatecar审题谋篇体裁应用文时态一般现在时，一般过去时主题今昔对比人称第一人称为主，第三人称为辅b结构第一部分：我的家乡发生了变化；第二部分：介绍家乡发生了哪些变化；第三部分：表达期望词汇推敲1．建起setup2．变化很大changealot3．对某人来说做某事很方便itisconvenientforsb.todosth.4．玩得开心enjoyoneself5．令我高兴的是tomydelight/enjoyment6．与某人联系keep/getintouchwithsb.7．在我有空的时候inmysparetime8．带领某人参观某处showsb.aroundsomeplace遣词造句1．完成句子①建起许多高楼，这些大楼都很具有现代气息也很漂亮。Morehighbuildingshaveappeared．Theyaremodernandbeautiful.②许多立交桥建立起来，非常方便人们出行。Manyoverpasseshavebeensetup.Itisveryconvenientforpeopletotravel.③相比以前来说，我可以更加容易地联系到你。Icankeepintouchwithyoumucheasierthanbefore.2．句式升级④用定语从句升级句①Morehighbuildingshaveappeared，whicharemodernandbeautiful.⑤用so引导结果状语从句升级句②Manyoverpasseshavebeensetup,soitisveryconvenientforpeopletotravel.⑥用形式主语it升级句③Itismucheasierformetokeepintouchwithyouthanbefore.妙笔成篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：DearLinda,Ireallythinkthatmyhometownhaschangedalotinthepastfiveyears.First,morehighbuildingshaveappeared,whicharemodernandbeautiful.Second,manyoverpasseshavebeensetup,soitisveryconvenientforpeopletotravel.Third,manyfamilieshavehadprivatecars.Thepeople’slifeherehasbecomerichandcolorful.Peoplecanenjoythemselvestravellingonholidays.Tomydelight,IcantastedeliciousfoodofdifferentcountriessuchasthefoodofAmerica...
