2021届高三百所名校好题精华速递分项汇编(2)之短文改错【2020届重庆市巴蜀中学高三高考适应性月考卷(十)】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Inthepastthreeyears,manyactivitieshadbeenorganizedbyourschool.Whatimpressedmemostlywasanactivitycalling“LearningtoFarm”.Inanautumnafternoon,wewenttoafarm,wherewelearnedknowledgeandhadmanyfun.Havingbeeninthecityforsuchalongtime,weweremorethanhappytogotoacountryside.Afterwearrived,wedividedintothreegroups.Somestudentslearnedhowtoraisepigs,someworkedinthegarden,andtheotherhelpedthefarmerswiththeworkinthefishpond.Itwasnotuntilitwastotallydarkwhenwestoppedworking.Thoughweweretiredoutbutwefeltpleasedonourwaybackhome.【答案】【解析】本文是说明文。作者介绍了一项叫做“学习农场”的学校活动。1.考查动词时态语态。根据时间状语“Inthepastthreeyears”判断句子应用现在完成时,主语是manyactivities,助动词应使用have。故had应改成have。2.考查副词。句意:给我印象最深刻的是一项被称为“学习农场”的活动。此处most为副词,强调程度上最大或最多,mostly意思为“主要地、通常”。故mostly应改成most。3.考查非谓语动词。分析句子可知,call作定语修饰anactivity,call与activity之间是被动关系,用过去分词做定语,表示被动。故calling改成called。4.考查介词。在一个秋天的下午,具体的上午或下午用介词On。故将In改为On。5.考查限定词。fun是不可数名词,用much修饰,many修饰可数名词。故many改成much。6.考查冠词。countryside为不可数名词,前面不能用a,习惯上用the。故a改成the。7.考查动词时态及语态。句意:我们被分成三组。主语we与谓语动词divide是被动关系,故用被动语态,根据arrived可知,用一般过去时。故we后面应增加were。8.考查不定代词。some…;others…表示“一些人……;其他人……”是固定用法。故other改成others。9.考查强调句型。句意:天全黑了我们才停止工作。去掉Itwas和when后,剩余成分能组成完整句子itwasnottotallydarkuntilwestoppedworking.故句子是强调句型,强调时间状语notuntilitwastotallydark,应使用that。故when改成that。【2020届宁夏银川一中高三下学期第五次模拟】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Manyparentshaveboughttheirchildrentheirowncomputers,hopethattheywillusethemsensiblefortheirschoolworkandhavethelatestskills.Schoolsteachinformationtechnologyasanessentialpartoftheschoolcurriculum.Butsomepeoplefeeltheyhavealotofdisadvantage.Teenagersdon’thaveabalancedlifeandcomputersareturningtheminto“geeks”whichnolongertakeexerciseorevenknowhowtohaveaconversation.Anexpertalsowarnedthedangersof“chatting”topeopleonedoesn’tknowovertheInternet.“IstronglyrecommendthatthegovernmentbanallInternetcafesassuchmanyteenagersarewastingtheirtimeongamesandInternetchattingwhichhasnothingtodowiththeirschoolwork.But,someteenagerscanbeseenasgoodexamplesastheyputtheenthusiasmforcomputerstogooduse.Computershelphimorganizetheschoolworkandlearnafuturecare...