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某地发生了某事故sth.happened/brokeout/occurredin+地点on+时间1.表示战争、火灾、水灾、旱灾、地震、意外事故（如交通事故、空难等）的发生.1)Abigfirebrokeout/happened/occurredin…AnaircrashAwar/fluAtrafficaccident练：03年4月中国广东及香港地区爆发“非典”。TheSARSbrokeoutinGuangdongandHongKongofChinainApril,2003.2)Anearthquakehit/struck/shookthedistrict.这地区受到地震的袭击。某地发生了某事故Sth.hit/struck/shooksomeplaceAbigfloodAdroughtA8.0magnitudeearthquake练：2008年5月12日约下午2:28四川汶川发生了7.8级的大地震。A7.8magnitudeearthquakehit/struckWenchuan,Sichuanaround2:28p.m.onMay12,2008.2.表示事故起因：词汇:becausedby/beduetothecauseof…was…1)这起车祸起因于驾驶疏忽。Thetrafficaccidentwascausedbycarelessdriving.2)起火的原因是由于疏忽。Thecauseofthefirewascarelessness.3)这火灾是由于有人丢落燃着的香烟而引起的。Thefirewasduetothefactthatsomeonedroppedalightedcigarette.3.表示人员伤亡：词汇:bekilled/beinjured/bedead/loseone’slife/causegreateconomiclossescause13deaths/injured/missing练2：1976年7月28日中国唐山发生了7.8级的大地震,造成24.2万人死亡、超过80万人受伤、30，000人失踪及巨大经济损失.A7.8magnitudeearthquakehitTangshan,ChinaonJuly28,1976,causing242,000deaths,over800,000injured,30,000missingandgreateconomiclosses.练1：成千上万的人在地震中丧生。Tensofthousandsofpeoplewerekilled/losttheirpreciouslifeowingto/inthebigearthquake.4.表示财产损失：房屋受损1)Manyhousesweredamagedbythestorm.becameinruinsinthestorm.felldownin….道路堵塞通讯、供水、供电中断：Themainroadswereblocked.Telecommunication,waterandelectricitysupplywerecutoff.非谓语:with+n.+adj./doing/done练1：房屋倒塌，整个唐山市顷刻间夷为平地，道路受阻，全市通讯、供水、供电中断.Thewholecitybecomeinruinswithhousesfallingdown,roadsblockedandtelecommunication,waterandelectricitysupplycutoff.练2：估计这次雪灾超过5百亿元的损失Itisestimatedthatthesnowstormhascausedalossofmorethan50billionyuan.估计…造成…损失Itisestimatedthat…hascausedalossof/thedamageof….5.救援行动词汇：sendsbtohospital;callinthepolice;callanambulance;donate/collectmoneyto;callonsbtodosthInternationalsocietiesofferedtheirhelpinghandsshortlyaftertheearthquake,donatingclothes,foodandmedicine.2）地震后，国际社会纷纷伸出援助之手---包括捐衣服，食品和药物。Fortunately,theinjuredpeopleweresenttohospitalwithoutdelay.1）幸运的是，受伤的群众被立刻送去医院.3）救援工作正在有序进行，与此同时，大家正在积极为灾区捐钱。Therescueworkisunderwayingoodorder,inthemeanwhile,peopleareactivelydonatingmoneytothedisaster/strickenareas.自然灾害五句话作文写得好的同学：萧晓东13，张淑韵12，张伟麟12，周芷兰12，张慧瑜11，何绮伦10，陈美玉10，萧沛添10，袁浩鹏10，萧俊豪10进步较大的同学：周嘉宇，萧沛添，莫启江，莫韵瑶，吴铭波书写亟需改进的同学：林景朗，史永新，韩立康，萧俊豪，袁建朗，蔡泳威，雷楚烨，秦杰至，郭冠迪，黄志亮逗号和句号没写清：萧泳发，李应初假如你是校报的学生记者，请你以下列内容写一篇关于甘肃舟曲泥石流(Landslide)的报道:发生时间：2010年8月7日夜22点左右发生地点：甘肃舟曲县（county）受灾情况：1.约1254人遇难，490余人失踪；2.舟曲县内三分之二的地方被水淹没，一个300余户的村庄被泥石流掩埋；3.房屋倒塌，交通受阻，电力供应中断经济损失：估计超过四百亿元目前情况：灾区应急救援已经结束，灾后重建(reconstruction)工作正在有序进行。五句话作文AseverelandslidehitZhouqucountyinGansuProvincearound22:00p.m.onAugust7th,2010,causingabout1,254deathsandover490missing.Twothirdsofthecountywasfloodedandavillagewith300homeswasburied.Moreover,thedisasterresultedinthedestructionofhundredsofbuildings,trafficproblemsandtheshortageofelectricitysupply.Itisestimatedthatthelandslidehascausedalossofmorethan40billionyuan.Atpresent,therescueworkhasbeenover,andthereconstructionworkafterthedisasterisunderwayingoodorder.AseverelandslidehitZhouqucountyinGansuProvincearound22:00p.m.onAugust7th,2010,causingabout1,254deathsandover490missing.Twothirdsofthecountywasfloodedandavillagewith300homeswasburied.Moreover,thedisasterresultedinthedestructionofhundredsofbuildings,trafficproblemsandtheshortageofelectricitysupply.Itisestimatedthatthelandslidehascausedalossofmorethan40billionyuan.Atpresent,therescueworkhasbeenover,andthereconstructionworkafterthedisasterisunderwayingoodorder.