模板__①__书信典例同龄压力(peerpressure)是青少年成长过程中经常遇到的问题。假如你是某中学高三学生李明，你的美国笔友Jack来信询问如何应对同龄压力。请你根据以下要点提示给他回一封书信。1．同龄压力不可避免；2．每个人都是独特的，没必要跟他人比；3．……注意：1.词数不少于120词；2.可适当增加细节。【写作策略】1．仔细审题：(1)体裁：书信。(2)时态：一般现在时。(3)人称：第一人称。2．确定结构：(1)Formalgreeting——可以用DearSir/Madam/DrSmith等。(2)Bodylanguage——正文内容。(3)Formalending——正式建议信结束语还要带上Yourstruly/sincerely等。3．筛选词汇：glad，common，vocabulary，makesuggestions，put...touse，learn...from...等。)4．句型搜索：(It’sveryimportantforsb.todo，I’dliketo...等。)5．组句成篇：(常用firstly，secondly，besides，lastbutnotleast等。)【范文赏析】DearJack，Inyourlastemail，youaskedabouthowtodealwithpeerpressure.①I’mverygladtosharemyviewswithyou.Peerpressureisacommonproblemforusyoungstudents.Weoftenfindsomeone②whoissuperiortous.③Forexample，theycomefromabetterfamily，ortheyhavemoretalents.④Firstly，Ithinkwemustfaceitratherthanavoidit.⑤Secondly，wemustknowthateveryoneofusisuniqueandhasourownadvantages.Weneedn’tcompareourselveswithothers.⑥Thirdly，wecanlearnfromthose⑦whohaverealtalents.It’suselessjusttoenvythem.Bylearningfromtheiradvantages，wecanimproveourselvesquickly.⑧Ihopemyadvicecanbeofhelptoyou.【名师点评】★①得体而礼貌地表达了自己的热情，同时，为下文→述建议做好了铺垫。★④⑤⑥层层递进，是文章具有思想性的集中体现。★⑧客气地表达了自己的愿望。★总体评价：思路清晰，层次感强；作者的建议具有极强的针对性。【写作指导】Elegance(优雅)(原文)Soso(普通)(1)I’mverygladtosharemyviewswithyou.NowIwilltellyouhowIdealwithsuchproblems.(2)Weoftenfindsomeonewhoissuperiortous.Weoftenfindthatsomepeoplearebetterthanusinsomeaspects.(3)Firstly，Ithinkwemustfaceitratherthanavoidit.Firstly，Ithinkwemusttakethisseriously.(4)Bylearningfromtheiradvantages，wecanimproveourselvesquickly.Wecanlearnfromtheiradvantagesandwecanimproveourselvesatthesametime.(5)Ihopemyadvicecanbeofhelptoyou.Ihopemyadvicewillhelpyou.【临摹翻译】1．范文佳句：Inyourlastemail，youaskedabouthowtodealwithpeerpressure.临摹翻译：在班会上，我们讨论了如何有效处理那些问题。Attheclassmeeting，wediscussedhowtodealwiththeproblemseffectively.2．范文佳句：Weoftenfindsomeonewhoissuperiortous.临摹翻译：他在技术上超过了他的对手。Heistechnicallysuperiortohiscompetitors.3．范文佳句：Firstly，Ithinkwemustfaceitratherthanavoidit.临摹翻译：我认为我们最好接受他的创意观点而不是反对它。Ithinkwehadbetteraccepthiscreativeidearatherthanopposeit.4．范文佳句：Weneedn’tcompareourselveswithothers.临摹翻译：把我们的状况和他们的状况相比较后我们很受鼓舞。Wearemuchinspiredaftercomparingtheirsituationswithours.5．范文佳句：It’suselessjusttoenvythem.临摹翻译：与第一次见面的人握手是非常必要的。Itisnecessarytoshakehandswhenyoufirstmeetsomeone.6．范文佳句：Ihopemyadvicecanbeofhelptoyou.临摹翻译：我们都知道，在旅游时一张地图是很有帮助的。Weallknowthatamapisofgreathelpwhentraveling.
