四川省仁寿县城北教学点2012届高三英语二轮复习专题训练:短文改错+书面表达(45)第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中错误.对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个“了”;如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉,该行缺一个词:、在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线。在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意:原行没有错的不要改。Mr.MooreistheteacherwhomIrespectmostly.66._______Thoughhe's34,helookedveryyoung.He'sthemost67.________popularteacherinourschool.ComparingwithOthers,68.________hepaysmuchattentiontohiswayofteaching.Hetries69.________variouswaytomakehisclassesinteresting.He70._______thinksweshouldknow"what"andunderstand"why".71._______So,healwaysencouragesmetothinkbyourselves.72.________Therefore,withhishelp,wealllearnedhowto73._______settleproblems.Howawonderfulworldof"why"74._______heleadunto!WealladmireMr.Moore.75.________【答案】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)66.mostly改为most67.looked改为looks68.Comparing改为Compared69.much改为more70.way改为ways71.正确72.me改为us73.all前/后加have74.How改为What75.lead改为leads第二节书面表达(35)如今世界粮食短缺,价格飞涨,给部分地区造成社会动荡。请就下面表格所提供的内容进行陈述并谈谈你的看法。注意:1.内容需包括以上要点,但不要逐句翻译2.字数100左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数3.参考词汇:城市化urbanization;生物燃料biofuels。Asyouknow,foodshortageshavehitmanycountriesintheworldand_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Onepossibleversion:Asyouknow,foodshortageshavehitmanycountriesintheworldandevencausedsocialunrestinsomeareas.Butwhoisresponsibleforthecurrentworldfoodcrisis?First,annualworldgrainsoutputhasdeclinedbecauseofclimatechange.Thenlotsoffarmlandhasbeenlostduetotherapiddevelopmentofindustryandurbanization.Thenwhatshouldwedotodealwiththeproblem?Ononehand,weshouldfocusontheenvironmentalprotectionandimprovetheecology.Ontheotherhand,strictmeasuresshouldbetakentoprotectfarmland.Asforme,Iwillcallonthepeoplearoundmetolivethriftily.Andforthemoment,Ithink,weshouldstudyhardtodevelopscienceandhelpsolvethefoodshortageinthefuture.【思路点拨】本文是一篇半开放性的议论文。试题只给出了简单的汉语提示,要求考生充分发挥想象力将文章扩展,这体现了新课标的命题思路。成文时应注意:1.文章的时态用现在时为主;2.人称以第一人称为主;3.文章内容要齐全;4.将零散的汉语提示有机的用连词结合起来,使文章提高质量。