四川彭州市2016高考英语【二轮】写作品析（7）基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）请阅读下面有个龋齿的相关信息：数据资料我国约有40%—60%的人患有龋齿病，儿童患龋齿率更高达70%以上。发病原因龋齿病发生的原因是多方面的，但饮食和饮食习惯是其中最主要的原因。预防措施1.注意均衡饮食,少吃糖，多吃富含纤维的蔬菜、水果及牛奶等；2.做到早晚刷牙，饭后漱口，尤其是睡前刷牙；3.定期进行口腔检查，发现龋齿，及时治疗。【参考词汇】龋齿病toothdecay纤维fiber【写作内容】1.龋齿的发病率；2.诱发龋齿的原因；3.预防措施。【写作要求】1.只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容；2.将这5句话组成连贯的短文。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作：Onepossibleversion:Statisticsrevealthatabout40%to60%ofthecitizensinourcountrysufferfromtoothdecaywhilemorechildrenarestrickenbysuchadiseasewitharatioof70%.Manyfactorsareresponsibleforthisdisease,butfoodanddietaryhabitsmaybethemostimportantfactors.Therefore,wearesupposedtobalanceourfood,eatingmorevegetablesrichinfibers,fruit,milkandsoon,insteadofsugar.Next,brushteethbothinthemorningandaftermeals,especiallybeforegoingtobed.Inaddition,weshouldtakeregularmedicaltoothchecksothatwecancurethediseaseintimeoncewearefoundcarryingbadteethinourmouth.【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学三模试题】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文Anationwithoutadreamisanationwithouthope.WehaveaChinaDream.ItincludesthestrongwilloftheChinesepeoplefortherenewal(复兴)oftheChinesenationandabetterlife.TheChinaDreamisthepeople'sdream.Tomakeitcometrue,thegovernmentshouldalwaysbeservice-oriented.Peoplewillonlyactresponsiblyforthecountryandhelptoachievetilenationaldreamwhentheirdreamsarerealized,too.Youcannotaskindividualstomakesacrificesforthenationiftheyreceivenothinginreturn.Moreover,thegovernmenthavetoknowwhatpeoplewantandwhattheyneed.AsXiJinpingsaidinhisfirstpublicspeechafterthe18thPartyCongress,theChinesepeoplewantbettereducation,stablejobs,higherincomes,greatersocialsecurity,bettermedicalandhealthcare,improvedhousingconditionsandbetterenvironmentalquality.HoweverwestillhavealongwaytogotoachievetheChinaDream.Chinesepeopleusedtothinkthateconomicgrowthwouldsolvealltheproblems,butnowwerealizethattherenewalofournationwillrequiremuchmorethanjustmoney.【写作内容】1．以约30个词概括以上文章的主要内容。2．然后以约120个词，就“梦想”发表你的看法，包括如下要点：(1)梦想在我们成长的道路上所起的作用；(2)列举一个为实现梦想而奋斗的事例；(3)为了实现“中国梦”，你能做些什么？【写作要求】1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】读写任务：Onepossibleversion:ThepassagetellsuswhattheChinaDreamincludesandinordertoachieveit,thegovernmentshouldbeservice-orientedandfindoutwhatpeoplewantandneed,whichrequiresconstantefforts.Dreamsplayquiteanimportantroleinourlife,providinguswithguidanceandmotivatingustoovercomeallkindsofdifficulty.Adreamistoapersonwhatthesunistotheworld.Westudentsmaybefacedwithmanychallenges,suchasendlesshomework,failuresinexamsandpressurefromparents.Whilethesedrownusinsadness,dreamsdocheerusup.Onlywhenonehasadreamandpursueitregardlessofanyobstaclecanoneachievesuccessintheend.Inreality,IamdeeplyimpressedbythestoryofJiaZuosheng,whopursuedhisdreamwithgreatdetermination.Althoughheneverfinishedhighschool,...
