平时要求：1. 格式 2. 人称3. 要点 4. 时态5. 字数 6. 语法7. 书写 词汇 , 句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂） 1. 覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 4. 语言得体要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？语言地道，规范 一 改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。The boy is very hungry and he hurried home.Hungry, the boy hurried home.The boy, hungry, hurried home. 二 . Transformation of sentences in writing( 写作中的句型转换 )1.把其中一句改为分词短语He had finished supper.He went out to have a walk then.Having finished supper, he went out to have a walk.A. 合并为简单句 二 . Transformation of sentences in writing( 写作中的句型转换 )2. 把其中一句改为介词短语He was brought in. His hands were tied behind his back.He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back. B. 合并为复合句1. The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered everyone of us.The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us. 2 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make people’s lives convenient, pleasant and colorful. which In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes people’s lives convenient, pleasant… With the development of so that Beijing, people’s lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful. Nowadays, Beijing is developing fast people’s lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful. C. 把复合句改为简单句She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies.Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job.1. 把从句改为分词短语 C. 把复合句改为简单句2. 把从句改为介词短语I insisted ...
