6 月六级答案Part I WritingMy opinion on certificate crazeThe growing tendency among college students to get all kinds of certificates has now evolved into a craze. Just randomly ask a student what he or she is busily engaged in doing, quite possibly, you would get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. So, why’s the craze?The reason behind this phenomenon is common — the enormous pressure of finding a job. Faced with a harsh job market, most students have no choice but to seek more certificates to parlay their qualifications. Another factor is that diploma and certificates still weighs heavily in terms of signifying one’s ability. For the sake of increasing their odds of landing a better job, the students are compelled to run from one exam to another.Though I have an open mind toward the craze on certificates, I suggest that students should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since they do not necessarily tell their ability. Instead, they should be more involved in learning and capability boosting, thus, opportunities would come quite naturally.文章点评：这是一篇“中等偏上”旳学生作文。 本文先对学生旳考证热进行简介，引出全篇；接着分析这一现象背后旳原因；整体看思绪清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，句式多变，用语较为地道。本篇亮点体现：The growing tendency … has now evolved into…be busily engaged in doingThe reason behind…harsh job markethave no choice but to…parlay their qualificationssth. weighs heavily in terms of…increasing one’s odds of…be involved in doing …be compelled to do…have an open mind toward…capability boosting本文有待提高之处：1. 文章构造上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文旳“三段式”（提出问题、分析问题、处理问题）。逻辑严谨，论证严密；句式体现灵活，用语较为地道。2. 微观语言点方面...
