写作园地回复电子邮件对应学生用书 P016[感悟范文]假定你是中学生李华，在一位名叫 TigerMom 的学生家长的博客上看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长写一篇电子邮件。I'm the mother of a fourteenyearold girl. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?写作要点：1.表明自己的看法；2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；3.提出至少两条建议。注意：词数不少于 120。参考词汇：评价 evaluate __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________[精彩范文]Hi, TigerMom，What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. ①My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.②Although high grades play an important part in evaluating students and their future university admission, yet development in emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. ③There are many examples around us. ④Some allA students in school have turned out not to be so successful in society as expected. ⑤The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. ⑥In addition, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.⑦So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. ⑧More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities as we teenagers often do. ⑨I hope you will change your mind and things will go smoothly.Yours，Li Hua亮点分析：1．文中使用了 that 引导的表语从句，且从句中运用 it ...
