2013 高考英语书面表达讲义及训练（27）及参考范文：书面表达中常见的错误一、用词不当 英语词汇十分丰富，一句话要表达某种含义，首先要选择合适的词。如要表达"她轻轻抚摸了一下他的脸。"学生译成"She slapped him on the face."（她打了他一耳光），令人啼笑皆非。又如"她由于不小心掉到河里了。"学生将其译成"She fell into the river with the mistake of foot."将"由于不小心" 译成"由于脚的错误"。应将其改为"because of carelessness"更好。可见写文章时，必须认真斟酌词句，不能用汉语式的英语往上搬。平时应注意同义词的学习，吃不准时，应多查词典。 6．假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友 Bob 来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。 自然情况① 位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住 成就 ② 经济发展迅速 ③ 新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。 存在问题④ 水、空气污染⑤ 交通拥挤对江城发展的看法⑥(内容由考生自己拟定) 注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。 2．词数 100 左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。 参考词汇：经济 economy n． Dear Bob， It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city.Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng． Yours， Xiaohua Dear Bob， It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng. The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under...
