7 步成文第五步靓词佳句升级完，衔接顺畅“修一番”习作的润色主要包括两方面，一是词句的美化，着眼于句子内部；二是语句的衔接，着眼于句子与句子之间、段与段之间。一篇 100 词左右的文章，几个衔接词看似微不足道，其实不然，缺乏有效衔接的文章就如同缺乏粘合的墙壁一样——松散、易垮。一、“四档”“五档”差在哪[典例感悟] (2018·浙江高考写作)假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：1．口语能力； 2.相关经验； 3.应聘目的。注意：1.词数 80 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。“冤屈的”四档作文(得分 11 分)升格后的五档作文(得分 14 分)Dear Sir/Madam，I've learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to receive foreign students visiting our school. I'm writing to apply to join it, thinking that I'm well qualified for the job.I have developed fluency in spoken English. I have no difficulty communicating with them. I have accumulated related experience by working parttime in a travel agency, accompanying some foreign tourists. I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective as well as improve my spoken English.Looking forward to your reply at your convenience.Yours，Li HuaDear Sir/Madam，I've learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to receive foreign students visiting our school. I'm writing to apply to join it, thinking that I'm well qualified for the job.For one thing, I have developed fluency in spoken English. As a result, I have no difficulty communicating with them. For another, I have accumulated related experience by working parttime in a travel agency, accompanying some foreign tourists. More importantly, I treasure this as a good chance to broaden my perspective as well as improve my spoken English.Looking forward to your reply at you...
