关于人生仪式 写作指导与解读参赛作文题目：我的下水文：写之前，一定要认真审题，注意三点：rituals you have observed; describe the details; explain the meaning这样看，就是夹叙夹议，夹杂一些说明。如果按照我们江苏作文特点，就容易跑题。我开始就这样的，后来才意识到问题。慎之！Rituals easily come across as grand ceremonies, like presidential inauguration, wedding ceremony and so on. However, rituals can be seen and felt everywhere in our daily life. They, just like thecatalyst, serve the purpose of removing gaps and lubricatingmutual communication, thus bringing people closer together.写作思路：通过对比法（普遍看法和实际情形）来突出人生礼仪的作用。最后一句是为了论证 rituals can be seen and felt everywhere in our daily life.修辞手法：英语是讲究隐喻特色，因此我用了催化剂和润滑油，通俗易懂，容易被读者理解。词语：come across as...给人什么印象catalyst 催化剂lubricate 加……润滑油（此处是比喻）serve the purpose of...起……的作用remove the gaps of...消除隔阂bring...closer together 让……更紧密Chinese are keen on traditional festivals which provide a golden chance for family members to get together. For many reasons, we young nowadays have to pursue our dreams in every corner ofthe world, burying the missing for our parents in the heart. However, on Mid-autumn days, for example, the whole family members will fly home, regardless of the heavy traffic. In my hometown, we give high priority to worshiping ancestors in honor of their contributions. On this occasion, my father likes telling their tales with great admiration and requires that we should follow their example and make a difference to the society. The tales, though repeated year by year, never lose their meaning but serve as a reminder of the past pains and gains. In the evening, the moon hanging in the sky smiling q...
