高考英语二轮复习 书面表达 如何真正提高作文分数？—实评一个优秀学生的作文学案-人教版高三全册英语学案VIP专享

如何真正提高作文分数？—实评一个优秀学生的作文关于作文下面我要评的作文是一个成绩比较好的网课班同学的作文，很多时候，很多学生弄不明白明明我已经很努力在写作了，句子长，各种复杂的语法结构；短语也有， 但为什么分数不高。本文主要讲讲这个。Nowadays, idol-worshiping is popular among teenagers. The idols are their heroes. They admire them, they imitate them, and their world seems to be filled with them. Recently, a pair of parents from Zhejiang province took their daughter, a middle school student, to a fan meeting for her favorite star in Shanghai, even though there was a typhoon in the city that day. Teenagers respond differently to the event.Wang Yuxin, 17:I don't agree with the parents' idea. To make their idol more popular, students often spend much money supporting them. They waste their time on these stars, which should be spent studying. What about the scientists who make lots of contributions to the development of society? Many people don't even know these scientists’ names.Wang Yidi. 15:I agree with the parents’ action. It's normal for a teenager to have a favorite star. In some aspects, the star they like is a reflection of the person they want to be. So, the star may motivate them to work harder. I admire parents who take their children to fan meetings, and I believe the experience will leave a great impression on these teenagers.【写作内容】1．用约 30 词概括上文的主要内容；2．用约 120 个词谈谈你对“偶像崇拜”的看法，并包括如下要点：⑴ 你如何评价目前年轻人“偶像崇拜”这一现象？⑵ 在你的生活中什么样的人会成为你的偶像，请举例说明。【写作要求】1．你可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。作文指导1.概括：具体的事例(某人做了某事)+评价The passage tells that a pair of parents accompanied their daughter to Zhejiang ...