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我们如何推敲写作用词？（以校园欺凌为话题）下面我们就说这篇文章的用词：School BullyingVarious school bullyings are now coming under the spotlight. Despite considerable efforts to tackle the issue, the effect is far from satisfactory.Quite a few factors give rise to the bullying issue. First, many convenient media online and off-line have provided fertile soil for negative information, especially concerning violence, which will be rooted in children's heart and lead them astray. Inadequate parental education should also be held responsible for their children's ignorance of laws and indifference to others' feelings. They will end up appealing to more simple but rude ways, like violent abuse, to serve their purposes.In fact, there is no simple solution to school bullying. Most important of all is proper guidance and monitoring from both schools and parents. Particularly, it is more emphasis on children's ethical development and mental health that can secure a harmonious school, instead of prioritizing their academic performance. After all, students' self-discipline and moral sense count for anything.推敲花絮节选：Various convenient media online and off-line make children exposed to negative information修改：Various convenient media online and off-line have provided fertile soil for negative information.理由：fertile soil 字面意思是“肥沃的土地”，但是这个 soil 可以进一步灵活运用，下面有具体解释。expose 这个词这里用得其实挺好的，但我们认为，最好用 expose children to...。这就涉及到 make 的消除规则，参看：详解版：School BullyingVarious school bullyings are now coming under the spotlight. Despite considerable efforts to tackle the issue, the effect is far from satisfactory.注解：1. spotlight n. ① 聚 光 灯 ② the spotlight [U] attention from newspapers,...