专题五 短文改错一1(2019·河南六市联考)话题：认养树木难度：★建议用时：7 分OneSaturdaymorning ， IwaswatchingTVwithmyparentswhenapieceofnewscaughtourattentions.TheGuangmingParkcalledonpeopleadopttrees.That’sexactwhatwehadbeenthinkingabout.Soonthenextmorning，wewenttotheparkdirectly.Aworkertheregaveusadetailedintroductionorshowedustothepinewoods.Wechooseabeautifulpinetreeandtheworkertiedaadoptioncardtoit.Whenmynamewasseeingonthecard，Iwassoproudandfeltasenseofresponsibilityatthesametime.Tomemorizetheexcitedmoment，wetookphotoswithournewfamilymember—thepinetree.Inoneofthephotos，webothsmiledfromthebottomofourhearts.答案 OneSaturdaymorning，IwaswatchingTVwithmyparentswhenapieceofnewscaughtour.TheGuangmingParkcalledonpeople\s\up7(∧)adopttrees.That’swhatwehadbeenthinkingabout.Soonthenextmorning，wewenttotheparkdirectly.Aworkertheregaveusadetailedintroductionshowedustothepinewoods.Weabeautifulpinetreeandtheworkertiedadoptioncardtoit.Whenmynamewasonthecard，Iwassoproudandfeltasenseofresponsibilityatthesametime.Tomemorizethemoment，wetookphotoswithournewfamilymember—thepinetree.Inoneofthephotos，wesmiledfromthebottomofourhearts.第一处：考查名词。attention 为不可数名词，故不可用复数形式。故将 attentions 改为attention。第二处：考查动词短语。callonsb.todosth.号召某人做某事。故在 adopt 前加 to。第三处：考查副词。这里用副词形式，修饰后面的从句。故将 exact 改为 exactly。第四处：考查介词。当时间名词被 this，that，last，next 等词修饰时，不用介词。故将on 去掉。第五处：考查连词。这里前后动作之间为并列关系，故用连词 and。故将 or 改为 and。第六处：考查时态。根据全文时态可知，此处应用一般过去时。故将 choose 改为 chose。第七处：考查冠词。名词 adoption 的发音以元音音素开头，故其前应用冠词 an。故将 a 改为 an。第八处：考查语态。myname 与动词 see 之间为被动关系，故用被动语态。故将 seeing 改为seen。第九处：考查形容词。这里修饰物 moment，故前用形容词 exciting，表示“令人激动的”。excited 兴奋的，修饰人。故将 excited 改为 exciting。第十处：考查代...
