英语四级模拟作文例一：PartⅠWritingDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledMaltingFriendsOnline.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.1．网上交友现象越来截止普遍。2．这种做法有利有弊。3．我的提议。答案:[高分作文]Withawidevarietyofvirtualcommunicationtoolsspringinguplikemushrooms,makingfriendsonlinehasbecomeincreasinglyfashionableoverthepastdecade.Thischannelofcommunicationenablespeopletogetacquaintedwithcyberfriendsfromanywherewithoutanylimitations,enrichingtheirlifeexperiencesandevenextendingtheirknowledge.What'smore,itisnotrareforsometofindtheirbosomfriendsandevenMr./Mrs.Right.Butasadouble-edgedsword,makingfriendswithoutphysicallymeetingeachotherundoubtedlyhasevils--tragediesoccurwhencyber-friendsfinallydecidetodate.Notcomingsinglybutinpairs,somespousesgetdivorcedbecauseonepartyfallsinlovewithcyber-lovers.Thenetworkrenderspeopleconvenientandefficientmeanstogetintouchwiththerestoftheworldandweshouldmakegooduseofitinsteadoffallingvictimstoit.[评析]这是一篇以分析某现象的利弊为主的阐明文。第一段用一句话阐明了伴随多种各样的(awidevarietyof)虚拟通信工具如雨后春笋般涌现(springinguplikemushrooms)，网上交友在过去十年里(overthepastdecade)变得越来越(increasingly)流行。with引导的名词+doing构造是表达原因的经典使用方法。第二段用What'smore连接了两个好处。其中的亮点词汇有：enablepeopletogetacquaintedwith“使人们认识……”；enrichingexperiences“丰富经验”和extendingknowledge“拓宽知识面”两个短语用了目前分词作伴随状语；itisnotrare表达“并不罕见”，比itiscommon更有力；bosomfriends“知心朋友”；Mr．/Mrs.Right“另二分之一；心上人”。第三段话锋一转，运用比方“就像一把双刃剑(asadouble-edgedsword)”，引出了害处。成语Notcomingsinglybutinpairs“无独有偶”的前后讲了两个害处，恰恰与前一段的两个好处形成对比。最终一段简洁地发出呼吁：网络给我们提供了便利、高效的接触外界的手段，我们应当好好运用它，而不应当成为其受害者。亮点词汇有：render,convenientandefficientmeans,fallvictimto。例二：Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledOnConservingEnergy.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.1．能源短缺问题已经非常严重；2．可以采用节能措处理能源短缺问题；3．你的见解。答案:[高分作文]Nowadaysthereisgrowingconcernontheseriousproblemofenergyshortage.Manypeopleworrythatenergyresourcesontheearthwillbeexhaustedifweusetheminanuncheckedway.Andtheybelievethattheenergyshortagewillcauseseriousproblemsandevencrisis.Conservingenergyisoneofthemeasureswhichhavebeentakentosolvetheproblemofenergyshortage.Forexample,somecountrieshaveadaylightsavingsystemtouselesselectricityforlighting.Also,somecitieshaveenforcedsomefacilitiesforsavingwateratpublicplacessuchasrestroomsandbars.Stillmore,somehaveenforcedseriouspenaltiesonoveruseofelectricity,water,andfarmingland.Bythesemeans,peoplehopethedrainonenergyresourcescouldbesloweddown.Inaword,itishightimethatseriousconsiderationwasgiventoconservingenergy.Onlythroughimmediateandeffectiveaction,canwehumanbeingssurviveandenjoylifeasdesired.[评析]节能是目前备受关注的一种话题，因此可说的内容诸多，紧紧围绕提纲规定进行论述是本文的鲜明特点。文章首段直截了当地提出能源短缺这样一种话题，中间段概括阐明节能是处理能源短缺问题的重要措施之一，运用并列型扩展法简介了几种节能措施。末尾段重申主题，再次强调问题的紧迫性和严重性。本文词语和句型运用自如。如第二段的列举法虽然没有使用first，second等...
