江苏省石庄高级中学高考英语文字书面表达讲评教案精选5某中学生英语报社举办中学生“2005感动中国”观后感征文。你被2005感动中国人物洪战辉的事迹深深感动。根据下面提示写一篇征文，投给这家报社。洪战辉事迹简介：1、1982年出生于河南农村；2、1994年父亲得了精神病并在当年捡来了一个刚出生的女弃婴；3、1995年，母亲不堪重负离家出走，他边学习边照顾检来的妹妹和生病的父亲，担负着常人难以想象的重担考上大学，并一直带着妹妹上大学，照看她……要求发表自己的感想，可适当发挥。注意：内容连贯，适当发挥；词数：120左右；参考词汇：2005感动中国TouchChina2005第一步：译出基本要点1、1982年出生于河南农村；HongwasborninHenanProvincein1982.2、1994年父亲得了精神病并在当年捡来了一个刚出生的女弃婴；In1994,hisfathergotmentaldiseaseandonedaybroughthomeanabandonednewly-borngirl.3、1995年，母亲不堪重负离家出走，他边学习边照顾检来的妹妹和生病的父亲，担负着常人难以想象的重担考上大学，并一直带着妹妹上大学，照看她……In1995,hismotherdesertedthefamilybecauseoftheheavyburden.Hongbegantotakecareofhislittlesisterandsickfatherwhilehewasstudying.Hehadovercomesomuchdifficultyandfinallyhewasadmittedtocollegebuthetookhislittlesisterwithhimandcontinuedtocareforher.第二步：开头语以引起所要说的话题RecentlyIwatchedTouchChina2005onTVandwasdeeplymovedbythestoryofHongZhanhui.第三步：把一些相应的年份换一种说法HongwasborninHenanProvincein1982.Whenhewas12hisfathergotmentaldiseaseandonedaybroughthomeanabandonednewly-borngirl.Ayearlater，hismotherdesertedthefamilybecauseoftheheavyburden.Hongbegantotakecareofhislittlesisterandsickfatherwhilehewasstudying.Hehadovercomesomuchdifficultyandfinallyhewasadmittedtocollegebuthetookhislittlesisterwithhimandcontinuedtocareforher.第四步：谈谈个人看法（将自己与洪战辉对比，你就有话可以说），合成文章Lookingback,Ifeelmuchashamedofmyself.Ihavebeentakingeverythinginmylifeforgranted,namelycarefrommyparents,luxurymateriallife,respectfromothers,andthelike.Personally,IholdtheviewthattherearemanygoodqualitiesinHongworthourlearning,hissenseofresponsibility,courageandaboveallalovingheart.参考答案RecentlyIwatchedTouchChina2005onTVandwasdeeplymovedbythestoryofHongZhanhui.HongwasborninHenanProvincein1982.Whenhewas12,hisfathergotmentaldiseaseandonedaybroughthomeanabandonednewly-borngirl.Ayearlater,hismotherdesertedthefamilybecauseoftheheavyburden.Hongbegantoshouldertheresponsibilityoftakingcareofhislittlesisterandsickfather.Honglovedschoolandstudiedhard.Finallyhewasadmittedtocollegebuthetookhislittlesisterwithhimandcontinuedtocareforher.Lookingback,Ifeelmuchashamedofmyself.Ihavebeentakingeverythinginmylifeforgranted,namelycarefrommyparents,luxurymateriallife,respectfromothers,andthelike.Personally,IholdtheviewthattherearemanygoodqualitiesinHongworthourlearning,hissenseofresponsibility,courageandaboveallalovingheart.
