PartⅤWriting——英语名信片本单元的写作任务是写一篇英语名信片，是告知旅游状况的明信片。内容主要包括旅游见闻，旅行感受，作者的行为，和作者下一步的行程。旅游明信片介绍景点见闻用一般现在时，谈论过去的行程用一般过去时，介绍下一步的行程用将来时。【增分表达】1.描述景色的形容词splendid，grand，magnificent，charming2.描述旅游者行为、心情的短语beexcitedtoseesomespecialtreesandplants，haveawonderfulview3.谈论景点的名词短语touristattraction，touristdestination，scenicspot，placesoftouristattraction，naturalsplendor/attraction，summerresort，nationalpark假定你是李华，在海南旅游，收到朋友Sam的来信，询问你的旅游行程。请用明信片的方式给他回信介绍情况。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：布局谋篇很关键1.确定体裁：本文是一篇应用文；2.确定中心人称：本文主要人称为第一人称；3.确定主体时态：以一般现在时为主。第二步：核心词汇想周全1.beonatrip在旅游2.can’twaittoenjoy情不自禁地欣赏3.extremelyclear非常清新4.crowdsofvisitors成群的游客5.bemorethanhappy非常开心第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.IhavebeenonatripforlessthansevendaysinHainanwithmyfamily.(onatrip)我和家人在海南旅行了不到七天。2.Atthemoment，IamstayingatSanya.ItliesinthesouthofChina.(liein)目前，我住在三亚。它位于中国的南部。3.Afterwegotofftheplane，weenjoyedthebeautifulscenery.(getoff)下飞机后，我们欣赏美丽的景色。4.Whenwewerehavinglunchataseafoodrestaurantnearthebeach，ImadeanewfriendwithayoungmanfromAfrica.(makeanewfriendwith)当我们在海滩附近的一家海鲜餐厅吃午饭时，我与一个来自非洲的年轻人成为了新朋友。5.HeisattractedtoChinesecultureandhastravelledseveralplacesofinterest.(attract，interest)他着迷于中国文化，已经游览了很多风景名胜。第四步：句式升级造亮点1.用定语从句改写句2Atthemoment，IamstayingatSanyawhichliesinthesouthofChina.2.用can’twait改写句3Afterwegotofftheplane，wecouldn’twaittoenjoythebeautifulscenery.3.利用状语从句的省略改写句4Whenhavinglunchataseafoodrestaurantnearthebeach，ImadeanewfriendwithayoungmanfromAfrica.4.用定语从句将句4和句5合并为定语从句Whenhavinglunchataseafoodrestaurantnearthebeach，ImadeanewfriendwithayoungmanfromAfricawhoisattractedtoChinesecultureandhastravelledseveralplacesofinterest.第五步：过渡衔接连成篇7JulyHi，SamIhavebeenonatripforlessthansevendaysinHainanwithmyfamily.Atthemoment，I’matSanya.Wewenttherebyplane.Afterwegotofftheplane，wecouldn’twaittoenjoythebeautifulscenery.Theweatherisalittlehotbuttheskyisextremelyclear.Youcanseecrowdsofvisitors—theyoung，theold...ontheisland.Somearesurfingandothersdivinginthedeeperpartofthesea.Weareexcitedtoseesomespecialtreesandplantsalongtheroad.Whenhavinglunchataseafoodrestaurantnearthebeach，ImadeanewfriendwithayoungmanfromAfrica.HeisattractedtoChinesecultureandhastravelledseveralplacesofinterest.Itisdefinitelyanexcitingtrip.IfIhaveachance，Iwillbemorethanhappytovisittheplaceagain.Sincerelyyours，LiHua
