PartⅤWriting——体育故事故事重点在写事，而不在写人。但是，故事应以人为主题，讲述发生在人物身上的感人故事。故事应具有激励性，充满正能量，给人以启发，催人奋进，积极向上。语言具有趣味性，耐人寻味，同时，精炼、言简意赅。【增分表达】1.oneofthebestathletesinourcountry2.Heisgoodat...3.Heiseventhemostcapable...intheworld.4.keepthebestrecordof...untilnow.5.Ifindmyselffullofpassioninmyheart.6.Heisthebestexampleofmakingeveryefforttodevelophissportcareerandbreaksomanyrecords.7.Thisspiritisworthytobelearnedbyallofus.8.Withthisambition，hecoulddefeatanydifficulties.9.Facingdifficulties，heneverlosesheart.10.makemoreprogress...请用英语写一篇自己所经历的体育故事。内容要点如下：1.我是山东人。2.学校游泳队队员。3.从小就喜欢游泳，在学校里认真学习，放学后认真训练；经过努力取得了一系列的成绩。4.我认为……注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步：布局谋篇很关键►审题1.确定体裁：本文为记叙文；2.确定中心人称：本文主要为第一人称；3.确定主题时态：一般现在时或过去时。►构思第一部分：简要介绍自己。第二部分：自己的故事。第三部分：对体育运动的认识和对未来的期许。第二步：核心词汇想周全1.amemberof...是……的一员2.winagoldmedal赢得一枚金牌3.becomeachampion成为冠军4.getgreatachievements获得巨大成就5.loseheart失去信心6.advisesbtodosth建议某人做某事第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.Iamamemberofschoolswimmingteam.我是学校游泳队的队员。2.IlovedswimmingwhenIwasasmallboy.我小的时候喜欢游泳。3.Ihavegotgreatachievements.我已经取得了巨大成就。4.Inevergiveuptraining.我从来不放弃训练。5.Imeetdifficulties.我遇到困难。6.Ineverloseheart.我从来不灰心丧气。第四步：句型升级造亮点1.将句2改成一个含有since状语从句的句子。IhavebeenlovingswimmingsinceIwasasmallboy.2.将句3和句4合并成含有though引导让步状语从句的句子。ThoughIhavegotgreatachievements，Inevergiveuptraining.3.将句5和句6合并成主从复合句。WheneverImeetdifficulties，Ineverloseheart.第五步：过渡衔接连成篇IamfromShandong，amemberoftheschoolswimmingteam.Iam198cminheight.IhavebeenlovingswimmingsinceIwasasmallboy.At7Ibecameamemberoftheschoolswimmingteam.Fiveyearslater，IwonagoldmedalattheCountySwimmingChampionshipandbecameachampionattheNationalSwimmingChampionshipslater.ThoughIhavegotgreatachievements，Inevergiveuptraining.OnedayIinjuredmyarmintraining，someoneadvisedmetoseeadoctor，butIrefused.WheneverImeetdifficulties，Ineverloseheart.Swimmingnotonlybuildsmybodybutalsoshapesmydeterminedcharacter.Idreamofbecominganationalswimmerandtakingpartintheinternationalswimmingeventsonbehalfofourcountry.
