SectionⅤWriting-诗歌改写[技法指导]本单元的写作任务是诗歌改写。改写是用不同形式表达同一内容，使之成为与原文意思相同而表达方式、文体不同的作品。改写可以变换文章的人称、顺序，可以改变原文的体裁、结构，也可以灵活运用自己的语言，尽可能用多种方法来表达、替换原文的内容。写作时，要注意以下几点：1．根据诗歌内容对文章进行合理的引入；2．在原诗的基础上，结合生活实际，展开合理的想象，对原有的内容进行扩展；3．点出中心，给出合理的结尾。黄金表达：教你如何营造亮点1．Writtenby...,thegreatpoetoftheTangDynasty,thepoem...vividlydescribes...2．Whilereadingthepoem,youcan'thelpthinkingof...and...whichare...3．Thepoemmainlyrevealsthereallifeofthepeopleliving...4．Eventhoughitisconsidered...bymostpeople,thepoeminfactexpresses...5．Thepopularityofthepoemisstill...eventhoughwehaveexperiencedgreatchangesin...6．Asoneofthemostvaluablepoemsin...,thepoemremindspeopleof...7．Peoplecanthinkoftheexperienceoftheirreallifewhentheyreadthepoem.8．We'llhaveastrongsenseof...whenwereadthepoembecause...9．Itisgenerallyacceptedthatthepoemrepresentstheconditionsof...atthattime.10．Ithinkthepoemwillstillinfluencepeoplewho...because...[写作规范][题目要求]请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇与时间有关的短文。TimeIsMoneyListen,hisstepsarelight.Ticktock,ticktock，Listen,hiswordsarelight.Ticktock,ticktock，TheOldManofTimeisrunning.Hetellsustocatchupwithhim.Oh,timeismoney.Don'twasteyourvaluabletime.Ticktock,ticktock,ticktock.注意：1．不得照抄短诗原文；2．结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开；3．突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯；4．短文不能写成诗歌的形式；5．词数100左右。[三步作文法]第一步：搜索词汇1．事实上in_fact/as_a_matter_of_fact/in_reality2．珍惜value3．有限的limited4．充分利用make_full_use_of5．总之in_conclusion/in_a_word6．养成……的好习惯get_into_the_good_habit_of/form_the_good_habit_of第二步：由词造句1．翻译句子①每一秒都是珍贵的。Every_second_is_precious.②我们应该充分利用我们的时间。We_should_make_full_use_of_our_time.③现在有很多人。There_are_a_lot_of_people_now.④他们不知道时间的重要性。They_do_not_know_the_importance_of_time.⑤他们没有意识到浪费时间就是浪费他们宝贵的生命。They_do_not_realize_that_wasting_time_is_simply_wasting_their_valuable_life.⑥这是很羞愧的。It_is_a_shame.2．句式升级⑦用原因状语从句连接①②句Because_every_second_is_precious,_we_should_make_full_use_of_our_time.⑧用定语从句连接③④句There_are_a__lot_of_people_now_who_do_not_know_the_importance_of_time.⑨用“it＋is＋n.＋that从句”连接⑤⑥句It's_a_shame_that__they_do_not_realize_that_wasting_time_is_simply_wasting_their_valuable_life.第三步：连句成篇Peopleoftensay,“Timeismoney.”Butinfacttimeismorevaluablethanmoney.Why?Becausewhenmoneyisspent,wecanearnitback.However,whentimeislost,itwillneverreturn.Thisisthereasonwhywemustvaluetime.Thetimewehaveislimited.Becauseeverysecondisprecious,weshouldmakefulluseofourtime.Buttherearealotofpeoplewhodonotknowtheimportanceoftime.Theywastetheirtimechatting,smokingordrinkingandit'sashamethattheydonotrealizethatwastingtimeissimplywastingtheirvaluablelife.Inaword,weshouldgetintothegoodhabitofsavingtime.Donotleavewhatcanbedonetodayuntiltomorrow.Alwaysremember,timeismoney.[对应学生课下能力提升(二十四)]Ⅰ.阅读理解ThePoetryFoundationrecentlynamedAmericanpoetJackPrelutskyasthenation'sfirstchildren'spoetlaureate(桂冠诗人)．ThegroupcreatedtheawardasawaytoincreaseAmericans'loveofpoetryfromanearlyage.Aschi...
