江苏省石庄高级中学高考英语文字书面表达讲评教案精选7最近你班举行了一场关于“动物园里笼养动物好不好”的讨论。假如你是李华，请你根据下表提供的信息，用英语将讨论的结果向某中学生英语报投稿，并陈述你的观点（至少发挥一条）。注意：字数100左右。赞成的同学认为反对的同学认为你的观点1、有机会亲眼目睹野生动物。1、浪费人力物力。……2、有助于培养对动物和自然的爱。2、破坏生态平衡。3、能保护动物免于野生环境的危险。3、动物失去自由。DearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionweheldonwhetheritisgoodtokeepanimalsinzoos.______________________________________________________________________________________一、提炼要点第一节：很多同学赞成动物园笼养动物。（他们认为这样）（人们就）有机会亲眼目睹野生动物，这有助于培养（人们）对动物和自然的爱；（同时，）（笼养）还能保护动物免于野生环境的危险。第三节：（相反地）很多也同学不赞成动物园笼养动物。（他们认为）笼养动物浪费人力物力，破坏生态平衡。同时，动物也失去自由。第三节：在我看来，笼养野生动物是错误的，为了保证他们健康成长和生态平衡，应该释放所有野生动物。二、灵活表达要点第一节1.很多同学赞成动物园笼养动物:①Manystudentsinourclasssupporttheideathatanimalscanbekeptinzoos.②Manystudentsinourclassagreethatzooscankeepsomewildanimals.③Someofthestudentsinourclassthinkit(is)agoodideatokeepanimalsinzoos.2.（他们认为这样就）有机会亲眼目睹野生动物：①Theyarguethattheywillhavetheopportunitytoseewildanimalsif(theyare)keptinzoos.②Theythinkthatifanimalsarekeptinzoos,theycangoandhaveaclearlookatthem.③Theybelievethatonlyinthisway,cantheywatchwildanimalseasily,clearlyandsafely.3.这有助于培养（人们）对动物和自然的热爱。①Ithelps(to)increasepeople’sloveforanimalsandnatureiftheyseewildanimalsinzoos.②Takingalookatwildanimalscanincreasepeople’sloveforanimalsandnature.③Itisgoodforpeopletoseeanimalsinzoos,becausetheycandevelopafurtherunderstandingofanimalsandnature.4.（笼养）还能保护动物免于野生环境的危险①Wildanimalscanbeprotectedfromdangersinthewild.②Wildanimalscanbepreventedfrombeingendangerediftheyarekeptinzoos.③Animalskeptinzooscangetawayfromthedangersinthewild.第二节1.很多也同学不赞成动物园笼养动物:①Otherstudentsareagainsttheideaaboutkeepinganimalsinzoos.②Otherstudentsthinkit(is)nogoodkeepinganimalsinzoos.③Therestofthestudentshaveatotallydifferentattitudetowardstheidea.2.他们认为）笼养动物浪费人力物力，破坏生态平衡:①Theythink(that)itisawasteofmoneyandlabortokeepanimalsinzoosandthatitwilldamagethebalanceofnature.②Theyargue(that)keepinganimalsinzoosisawasteofmoneyand,worsestill,willhaveanegativeeffectonthebalanceofnature.③Theybelievethatitisawasteofmoneyandlabortokeepanimalsinzoos,whichwillalsodoharmtothebalanceofnature.3.同时/另外，动物也失去自由:①Atthesametime,animalswilllosetheirfreedomifcagedinzoos.②Besides,animalswillhavenofreedomwhenkeptinzoos.③Inaddition,animalswillbedeprivedoffreedomwhenlivinginzoos.第三节在我看来，笼养野生动物是错误的，应该释放所有野生动物,以保证生态平衡。①Inmyopinion,itiswrongtokeepanimalsinzoos.Allanimalsshouldbesetfreesoastokeepthebalanceofnature.②Personallyspeaking,Iinsistthatitiswrongtokeepanimalsinzoosandthatanimals(should)besetfreetokeepthebalanceofnature.③Ipersonallyfeelitiswrongtotakeanimalsawayfromtheirnaturallivingareasandkeepthemlockedup.Isuggesttheanimals(should)besetfreetokeepthebalanceofnature.三、添加连词，连段成篇Deareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionweheldonwhetheritisgoodtokeepanimalsinzoos.Thosewhofavortheideathinkitprovideschancesforpeopletoseewildanimals.Itmightalsodeveloppeople’sloveforanimalsandnature.Besides,animalsinzooscanbeprotectedfromdangersinthewild.However,thosewhoareagainsttheideathinkthatit’sawasteofmoneyandlabortokeepanimalsinzoos.It’llalsodamagethebalanceofnature.Animalswilllosetheirfreedomifcagedinzoos.Ipersonallyfeelitiswrongtotakeanimalsawayfromtheirnaturallivingareasandkeepthemlockedup.Yourssincerely,LiHua
