读后续写微技能指导3—倒装句在续写中的运用Scoringlevel3(11~15points)Scoringlevel4(16~20points)Scoringlevel5(21~25points)logicalabundantaccuratecoherentVocabulary&GrammaticalstructuresInversionFightforthesecondchance!thequarrelingcoupleTomandJane—2016.6ZhejiangGetridofcommonmistakes!1.NotonlyJanewasexhaustedandhungry,butwasalsodeeplyregretfulforherunreasonablebehaviors.2.NosoonerdidJaneseetheseberrieswhensherealizedhowstarvingshewas.3.OnlywasJaneinsuchhelplesssituationwhenshewasawarethatherbelovedTommeantsomuchtoher./\shewasJanehadJaneseenthanwhenJanewasinsuchhelplesssituationNosoonerhadsbdonesththan…Only+adverbs/adverbialclause+inversion.\wasshe/Hardlyhadsbdonesthwhen…Review倒装语序部分倒装完全倒装整个谓语+主语Incameourteacher.系动词/助动词/情态动词+主语+动词NeverwillIforgetyou.一、完全倒装谓语动词完全放置主语之前的句子，便是完全倒装句。为了强调状语，把表示方位或时空的副词或介词短语，如here，there，now，then，up，down，in，away，off，out，intheroom，onthewall等，置于句首时。1)InalecturehallofauniversityinEnglandsitsaprofessor.2)Southoftheriverliesasmallfactory.二、部分倒装1．only修饰副词、介词短语或状语从句，且放在句首时。OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.翻译：只有以这种方法，我们才能学好英语。Only+状语（介词短语/副词/状语从句），位于句首never,hardly,scarcely几乎不，仅仅，决不seldom,little,barely仅够，几乎没有rarely不常，很少nowhere无处，到处都无bynomeans;innocase;atnotime决不not…until;hardly(scarcely)…when,nosooner….than(…一..就)2.在否定或半否定词放句首表示强调时，部分倒装。NeverbeforehaveImethim.Seldomdidtheboyreadnewspaper.LittledoIdreamofseeingsuchwonderfulscenery（风景）.3.Nosooner…than…Hardly/Scarcely…when…一…就（两个动作一前一后发生）他们一走出房间就下雨了。1）Nosoonerhadtheygoneoutoftheroomthanitbegantorain.2）Hardlyhadtheygoneoutoftheroomwhenitbegantorain.前一个分句用部分倒装，后一个分句不变。Hespokesoloudlythatevenpeopleinthenextroomcouldhearhim.4、在so/such...that...句式中，如果so/such引导的部分位于句首时，主句中的主语和谓语需要部分倒装.天这么黑，他看不见同伴的脸。Sodarkwasitthathecouldn’tseethefacesofhiscompanions.Translatesentences1.Jane在之前的人生中从未体会过如此强烈的后悔之情。(Never…)2.Jane太累了，以至于她一躺下就很快睡着了。(So…that…)(Hardly…)•NeverbeforeinJane’slifehadshebeensoovercomebyregret.•SotiredwasJanethatshefellfastasleepthemomentshelaydown.•Hardly/NosoonerhadJanelaiddownwhen/thanshefellfastasleepbecauseofexhaustion.1.NotonlywasJaneexhaustedandhungry,butshewasalsodeeplyregretfulforherunreasonablebehaviors.2.NeverbeforeinJane’slifehadshebeensoovercomebyregret.3.Nosooner/HardlyhadJaneseentheseberriesthan/whensherealizedhowstarvingshewas.4.SotiredwasJanethatshefellfastasleepthemomentshelaydown.5.OnlywhenJanewasinsuchhelplesssituationwassheawarethatherbelovedTommeantsomuchtoher.Let’sconclude!Inwhichsituationscanweuseinversionincontinuationwriting?feelingsactionsthemehighlightingfeelingsactionsPracticemakesperfect!(Para2)ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Inthedistance,sheheardthehelicopteragain.Immediately,shetookoffheryellowblouseandwavedatthehelicopter.Althoughshewasexhausted,shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung.Amazingly,thehelicopterapproached!Tomgotoffthehelicopteranddashedtohisbelovedwifeatonce.SeeingTom,Janewassoexcitedthatshecouldn’thelpweeping.“Oh,mydearTom!Iwillneverleaveyouagain!”Thecouplehuggedtightly.Afterthislife-riskingjourney,theyrealizedthepreciouslovebetweenthemcouldconquereverydifficultyinlife.Whichsentencescanberewrittenwithinversion?①②③④⑤shecouldn’thelpweeping.NeverwillIleaveyouagain!”Onlyafterthislife-riskingjourneydidtheyrealizethepreciouslovebetweenthemcouldconquereverydifficultyinlife.Isitgoodenoughtoreachscoringlevel4or5?herlung.Exhaustedas/thoughshewas,shestillkeptyellingatthetopofHardlyhadTomgotoffwhenhedashedtohisbelovedwife.soexcitedwasJanethatWritingtipAgoodstorylogicalabundantaccuratecoherentVocabulary&Grammaticalstructures•inversion•participleforms:v-ing/v-ed•clauses•emphaticsentences•……
