2013高考英语二轮书面表达（四月）训练集（7）及参考范文AgoodfaceisaletterofrecommendationSomepeoplesaybeautyisjustaskindeep.Idon’tquiteagreewiththem.Goodappearanceoftenmakesabigdifferenceinsocialcommunication,competition，findingjobsandsoon.Notonlycangoodappearancehelpyoubecomemoreconfident，butalsoithelpsyoubeimpressed.Ifyouwanttogetagoodjob，thefirstsightisimportant.Physicalbeautyis①probabletodrawmuchattention.However，wehavetofacethisproblem.Wehavenorighttochooseourappearance.Whennecessary，wecanmakeupourselves.Ifyouthinkdoingthisisagoodwaytoimproveyourconfidence，justdowhatyoureallywanttoregardless②others’opinion.Itisworthallthemoneyandtime.Facingavarietyofsocialpressures，weyoungpeopleshouldbuildconfidence.Confidenceisthekeytosuccess.Inaword，youmaynotbethemostbeautifulone，butyoucanbethemostattractiveone；youmaynotthebestone，butyoucanbethemostconfidentone.Showyourselfandchanceswillkissyouintime.【点评】爱美之心人皆有之。我们追求美，创造美，一副好脸孔就是一封介绍信，作者围绕这一主题进行阐述。在现代社会里，美丽的外表在社交、竞争、求职等方面有着不可低估的作用。作者立意大胆，构思巧妙，很有个性。文章叙述清楚，层次分明，过渡自然。在语言表达上，运用倒装句、排比句等句式，增强了文章的感染力。文中语言错误有两处：①probable改为likely。probable不能用某人或某物作主语，常用it作形式主语，构成itisprobableforsb.todosth.结构。②regardless之后加of。regardlessof是复合介词，意为“不理会、不顾”。****************************************************结束Lesson42Moderncavemen现代洞穴人Caveexploration,orpot-holing,asithascometobeknowncometobeknown,isarelativelynewsport.Perhapsitisthedesireforsolitudeorthechanceofmakinganunexpecteddiscoverythatlurespeopledowntodowntothedepthsoftheearth.Itisimpossibletogiveasatisfactoryexplanationgiveasatisfactoryexplanationforapot-holer'smotives.Forhim,caveshavethesamepeculiarfascinationwhichhighmountainshavefortheclimber.Theyarouseinstinctswhichcanonlybedimlyunderstood.[来源:Zxxk.Com]ExploringreallydeepcavesisnotataskfortheSundayafternoonrambler.1Suchundertakingsrequirethepreciseplanningandforesightofmilitarymilitaryoperationsoperations.ItcantakeaslongasItcantakeaslongaseightdaystoriguprigupropeladdersandtoestablishsupplybasesbeforeadescentcanbemadeintomadeintoaverydeepcave.Precautionsofthissortarenecessary,foritisimpossibletoforetelltheexactnatureofthedifficultieswhichwillconfrontthepot-holer.ThedeepestknowncaveintheworldistheGouffreBergernearGrenoble.Itextendstoextendstoadepthof3,723feet.Thisimmensechasmhasbeenformedbyanundergroundstreamwhichhastunneledacoursethroughaflawintherocks.TheentrancetoentrancetothecaveisonaplateauintheDauphineAlps.Asitisonlysixfeetacross,itisbarelynoticeable.ThecavemightneverhavebeendiscoveredhadnottheentrancebeenspottedbythedistinguishedFrenchpot-holer,Berger.Sinceitsdiscovery,ithasbecomeasortofpot-holers'Everest(珠峰).Thoughanumberofanumberofdescentshavebeenmade,muchofitstillremainstobeexplored.AteamofAteamofpot-holersrecentlywentdownwentdowntheGouffreBerger.Afterenteringthenarrowgapontheplateauontheplateau,theyclimbeddownclimbeddownthesteepsidesofthecaveuntiltheycametonarrowcorridor.Theyhadtoedgetheirwayedgetheirwayalongthis,sometimeswadingacrosswadingacrossshallowstreams,orswimmingacrossdeeppools.Suddenlytheycametoawaterfallwhichdroppedintodroppedintoanundergroundlakeatthebottomofatthebottomofthecave.Theyplungedintoplung...
