2013高考英语二轮书面表达（四月）训练集（5）及参考范文假如你叫王方，乘出租车时丢了手提箱。在失物招领处，工作人员要求你用英文写一份书面材料。内容要点：1．上午11点钟到达机场，然后带着5件行李乘一辆黄色出租车到假日酒店（HolidayInn）；2．到达酒店后，发现由于粗心将手提箱遗失在出租车上。不幸的是，未注意到出租车的车牌号；3．手提箱是黑色的，由塑料制成，尺寸大约为60cm×40cm×16cm；4．箱内有一台摄像机、两条长裤、三件衬衫、几本儿童读物以及一个钱包。钱包内有一张2,000美元的支票；5．你的联系电话是：0435-3940526。注意：1.词数100左右；2.文章的开头已为你写好。MynameisWangFang.Iarrivedattheairportat11am...学生作品：MynameisWangFang.Iarrivedattheairportat11am.ThenItookayellowtaxitotheHolidayInnwithfiveluggages.WhenIarrivedattheHolidayInn,Ifoundmysuitcasehadbeenleftinthetaxibecauseofmycarelessness.Unfortunately,Ididn'tnoticethetaxi'slicence.Thesuitcaseisblackandmadeofplastic.Itisabout60centimetreby40centimetreby16centimetre.Init,thereisacamera,twopairsoftrousers,threepiecesofshirts,severalbooksforchildrenandapurse.Inthepurse,thereisacheckof2,000dollars.Couldthefindermakerelationwithme?Mytelephonenumberis0435-3940526.Thankyou.WangFang点评：1.第一段第3句：luggage为不可数名词，fiveluggages表达不正确，可改为fivepiecesofluggage。2.第一段第5句：licence意为"执照"，不是"牌照"，故thetaxi'slicence可改为thenumberofthetaxi。3.第二段第2句：表示度量单位的centimetre为可数名词，应把三个centimetre都改为centimetres。4.第二段第3句：Init过于简短，不必在其后停顿，其后逗号应去掉。5.第二段第3句：shirt是可数名词，threepiecesofshirts表达不正确，应改为threeshirts。6.第二段第4句：表示价值时，通常用介词for，故of最好改为for。7．第三段第1句：makerelationwithme表达不正确。习作者想表达"与我取得联系"，可改为getintouchwithme或returnthesuitcasetome。修改好的文章：MynameisWangFang.Iarrivedattheairportat11am.ThenItookayellowtaxitotheHolidayInnwithfivepiecesofluggage.WhenIarrivedattheHolidayInn,Ifoundmysuitcasehadbeenleftinthetaxibecauseofmycarelessness.Unfortunately,Ididn'tnoticethenumberofthetaxi.Thesuitcaseisblackandmadeofplastic.Itisabout60centimetresby401centimetresby16centimetres.Initthereisacamera,twopairsoftrousers,threeshirts,severalbooksforchildrenandapurse.Inthepurse,thereisacheckfor2,000dollars.Couldthefindergetintouchwithme?Mytelephonenumberis0435-3940526.Thankyou.WangFang******************************************************结束Lesson41IllusionsofPastoralPeace宁静田园生活的遐想Thequietlifeofthecountryhasneverappealedtoappealedtome.Citybornandcitybred,Ihavealwaysregardedthecountryasregardedthecountryassomethingyoulookatthroughatrainwindow,orsomethingyouoccasionallyvisitduringtheweekend.Mostofmyfriendsliveinthecity,yettheyalwaysgointorapturesgointorapturesatthemerementionatthemerementionofofthecountry.Thoughtheyextolthevirtuesofthepeacefullife,onlyoneofthemhasevergonetoliveinthecountryandhewasbackintownwithinsixmonths.Evenhestilllivesundertheillusionthatundertheillusionthatcountrylifeissomehowsuperiortosuperiortotownlife.Heisforevertalkingabouttalkingaboutthefriendlypeople,thecleanatmosphere,theclosenesstonatureandthegentlepaceofliving.Nothingcanbecompared,hemaintains,withthefirstcockcrow,thetwitteringofbirdsatdawn,thesightoftherisingsunglintingonthetreesandpastures.Thisidyllicpastoralsceneisonlypartofthepicture.MyfriendfailstofailstomentionthelongandfriendlesswintereveningsinfrontofinfrontoftheTV----virtuallytheonly...
