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社会热点类范文2011年6月真题OnlineShopping题目要求Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledonOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1．现在网上购物已成为一种时尚。2．网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题。3．我的建议。审题思路这是一篇现象解释型议论文。随着科学技术的日新月异，电脑走进了千家万户，而网购更是随着电子商务的发展而为人熟知。文章可以分为四段，首段阐述背景和现状，如果你支持网络购物，第二点可着重分析网购的好处第三段只需陈述反对者的意见，最后一段表明自己的观点，与第二段相呼应写作思路第一段：描述事实，越来越多的人热衷于网购，网上购物成为一种时尚。第二段：有些人认为网购有诸多好处，可列举三点。第三段：有些人则反对网购，主要原因为不安全等。第四段：表示自己支持网购。范文及高分点评范文OnlineShopping(1)Inrecentyears,onlineshoppinghasbecomemoreandmorepopular.Books,clothes,householdappliances,toys,hardware,software,andhealthinsurance,justtonameafew,canbeboughtonlinefromonlinestores.(2)However,people’sviewsdiffer.Firstly,manypeopleprefertoshoponlinebecauseoftheconvenienceitoffers.Onlinestoresareusuallyopenaroundtheclock,andmanyconsumersonlyhavetimetoshopafterwork,soonlineshoppingseemstobethebestchoiceinourhecticlife.Furthermore,people(4)areusuallypresentedwithmorechoicesonline.Tensofthousandsofstoressupplydifferenttypesofproductstosatisfythecustomers.Anotheradvantageofshoppingonlineisthe(5)competitivepriceandgreateraccesstoinformation.(6)Despitetheaboveadvantages,noteveryonelikestopurchaseonline.(7)Somepeopleworrythattheproductstheybuyarenotasgoodasthoseillustratedbythepictures.Otherpeoplemayfearthattheircreditcardinformationwillbeleaked.(8)Personally,IaminfavorofonlineshoppingsinceIbelievealltheaboveriskscanbeaverted.(9)Youcanstickwithrenownedstores,orrefertothereviewsofotherconsumers.Bydoingthis,youcanavoidbeingcheated.Asforyourcreditcard,youarestronglysuggestedtouseacomplexpassword.高分点评（1）首句开篇点题，易于抓住读者的注意力。（2）转折句引出下文的讨论。第一段行文干净利索。（3）第二段是重点讨论部分，论述网购的好处。如果考生持反对态度，文章应侧重相反的论点。（4）Bepresentedwith意为“被提供”。（5）Competitiveprice指“有竞争力的价格”，即“很便宜”。（6）第三段首句点明本段主旨，即并非所有人都喜欢网购。（7）用somepeople和otherpeople引出两个反对观点。（8）最后一段给出作者的观点，并再次点题：“我”支持网购。（9）提出了针对以上两个反对论点的规避方法，使正方论点更具说服力。Stick的本意是“黏着”，在这里指“坚守，继续做”。闪光词汇Appliancen.器具，用具，（家用）电器Aroundtheclock一天24小时地Hecticadj.繁忙的，忙乱的Illustratev.举例说明，阐明Leakv.泄漏，渗漏Avertvt.避免防止Renownedadj.有名的，著名的Complexadj.复杂的万能句型Firstly,manypeoplepreferto…becauseof…Personally,Iaminfavorof…sincebelievealltheaboveriskscanbeaverted.触类旁通MoneyWorship题目要求Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMoneyWorship.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.当年拜金现象严重;2.拜金主义有什么影响和后果；3.你对拜金主义的见解。现象解释型文章2010年12月真题HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependence?题目要求Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependence?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切；2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该…..审题思路该题属于现象解释型文章，也比较贴近学生的...