社会热点类范文2011年6月真题OnlineShopping题目要求Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledonOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚。2.网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题。3.我的建议。审题思路这是一篇现象解释型议论文。随着科学技术的日新月异,电脑走进了千家万户,而网购更是随着电子商务的发展而为人熟知。文章可以分为四段,首段阐述背景和现状,如果你支持网络购物,第二点可着重分析网购的好处第三段只需陈述反对者的意见,最后一段表明自己的观点,与第二段相呼应写作思路第一段:描述事实,越来越多的人热衷于网购,网上购物成为一种时尚。第二段:有些人认为网购有诸多好处,可列举三点。第三段:有些人则反对网购,主要原因为不安全等。第四段:表示自己支持网购。范文及高分点评范文OnlineShopping(1)Inrecentyears,onlineshoppinghasbecomemoreandmorepopular.Books,clothes,householdappliances,toys,hardware,software,andhealthinsurance,justtonameafew,canbeboughtonlinefromonlinestores.(2)However,people’sviewsdiffer.Firstly,manypeopleprefertoshoponlinebecauseoftheconvenienceitoffers.Onlinestoresareusuallyopenaroundtheclock,andmanyconsumersonlyhavetimetoshopafterwork,soonlineshoppingseemstobethebestchoiceinourhecticlife.Furthermore,people(4)areusuallypresentedwithmorechoicesonline.Tensofthousandsofstoressupplydifferenttypesofproductstosatisfythecustomers.Anotheradvantageofshoppingonlineisthe(5)competitivepriceandgreateraccesstoinformation.(6)Despitetheaboveadvantages,noteveryonelikestopurchaseonline.(7)Somepeopleworrythattheproductstheybuyarenotasgoodasthoseillustratedbythepictures.Otherpeoplemayfearthattheircreditcardinformationwillbeleaked.(8)Personally,IaminfavorofonlineshoppingsinceIbelievealltheaboveriskscanbeaverted.(9)Youcanstickwithrenownedstores,orrefertothereviewsofotherconsumers.Bydoingthis,youcanavoidbeingcheated.Asforyourcreditcard,youarestronglysuggestedtouseacomplexpassword.高分点评(1)首句开篇点题,易于抓住读者的注意力。(2)转折句引出下文的讨论。第一段行文干净利索。(3)第二段是重点讨论部分,论述网购的好处。如果考生持反对态度,文章应侧重相反的论点。(4)Bepresentedwith意为“被提供”。(5)Competitiveprice指“有竞争力的价格”,即“很便宜”。(6)第三段首句点明本段主旨,即并非所有人都喜欢网购。(7)用somepeople和otherpeople引出两个反对观点。(8)最后一段给出作者的观点,并再次点题:“我”支持网购。(9)提出了针对以上两个反对论点的规避方法,使正方论点更具说服力。Stick的本意是“黏着”,在这里指“坚守,继续做”。闪光词汇Appliancen.器具,用具,(家用)电器Aroundtheclock一天24小时地Hecticadj.繁忙的,忙乱的Illustratev.举例说明,阐明Leakv.泄漏,渗漏Avertvt.避免防止Renownedadj.有名的,著名的Complexadj.复杂的万能句型Firstly,manypeoplepreferto…becauseof…Personally,Iaminfavorof…sincebelievealltheaboveriskscanbeaverted.触类旁通MoneyWorship题目要求Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMoneyWorship.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.当年拜金现象严重;2.拜金主义有什么影响和后果;3.你对拜金主义的见解。现象解释型文章2010年12月真题HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependence?题目要求Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependence?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切;2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该…..审题思路该题属于现象解释型文章,也比较贴近学生的...