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Composition1DigitalTVTelevisionhasalreadypresentedavividworldinfrontofthepeople.Andnow,withthedevelopmentofmodernsciences,anewtypeofTV—digitalTVhastakentheplaceoftraditionalTV.Itnotonlyplaystheroleoftheold-fashionedcolorTV,butalsochallengestheoldwaysofTVstationbroadcastingprogramsandtheviewersreceiving.Forexample,oneex-changedigitalTVhasonepartofthescreenwhichcanshowamenu,likenews,TVprogramschedule,networketc,whilepeoplecanwatchtheordinaryTVprogramsatthesametime.DigitalTVcanalsoplayrolesofprogram-picking-up,advertisement-choosing,gameexchangeplay,internetonline,shopping-on-TV,electric-commercialTV,remoteTVeducationprogram,remoteTVmedicalcare,longdistanceworkingoffice,TVbankingsystem,visualtelephone,andTV-conference,etc.AlthoughdigitalTVwillbeverypopularinthenearfuture,andpeoplewillbenefitalotfromit,itwillalsobeverybeneficialtotheTVproducers.TheTVbuyerswillpaymoreandspendmoretimeinfrontofthenewtoy.AlsosomepeoplewouldcommitsomenewkindsofTVcrimesonthem.ThesolutionistorestrictthedarksideandbroadenthebrightsideofthemoderndigitalTV.Composition2CET-4作文评分样卷题目:MyIdealJob样卷12分——条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。.Thereareallkindsofjobonworld.Sopeoplehavedifferentidealtojob.TheteachertoldmethatshouldhaveaidealjobwhenI’machild.SoIchoicemyidealjobinallkindsofjob.Myidealjobisbecomeaeconomicer.Becauseeveryonehaveitselfthink.Sotheiridealjobisdifferent.Ichoicethejobbecauseitfittome.Thisjobhavemoremoney.Thisisreal.But,ituselesstoourcountryimportant.Ourcountryisadevelopingcountry,needeconomicerverymuch.So,Ichoicethisjob.Myidealjobisbecomeaeconomicer,soImustylearneconomicknowledgeworkhard.Learnknowledgefromteacherintheclass.Learnknowledgefrommyselfafterclass.Lookatbookabouteconomic.Readyformyidealjob.usemyknowledyabouteconomicinpractis.Becomearealuselessmen.样卷25分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性较差。有较多的严重语言错误。Therearealotofjob,suchasteacher,work,doctor,nurse,driverandsoon.People’sidealjobaredifficutly.Somewanttobeateacher,teachalotofstudents,somewanttobeabus-driver,helpotherpeoplegotheplacewheretheyintendtogo,…Whatismyidealjob?SometimesIaskmyselfthequestion.Ilikemyteacchersverymuch.SoIthink,Myidealjobisteacher.Iteachmyknowlagetomystudent,theycanbeausefulpeople.Ithink,Iwillteachmystudentthebooksandmanyotherknowlage.So,now,Iamstudyinghardandstudyingotherknowlage.样卷38分——基本切题,有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。Everypeoplewhenhegrowsup,willhaveajob.Peoplehavevariousaims.Somepeoplewanttoearnalotofmoney.Somepeoplewanttobefamous…Sopeoplehavevariousidealjobs:manager,doctor,actor,teacherandsoon.Idon’twanttoearnalotofandtobefamous.IhopeIcanenjoymyjob.Myidealjobisteacher.IfIwereateacher,Iwouldalwaysyoung.BecauseIwillbeabletooftenstaywithyouth.NowImuststudyhard,andIoughttolearnalotfrommyteachersbesidesknowledge.Ishouldlearntheirvirtue.Thus,Iwillbeagoodteacher.样卷411分——切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯。但有少量语言错误。Eachpersonhashisorherownidealjob.Forinstance,menmightwanttobesailors,sportsmen,scientists,businessmen,etc.Meanwhile,manyyounggirlswouldliketobenurses,filmstars,teachers,etc.Tobefrank,myidealjobisbusiness,thatis,Iwanttobeabusinesswoman.Thisjobbelongstomenformanycenturies.Althoughtherearemorewomeninthisfieldthaneverbefore,menarestillthemajority.ThereforeIwanttobe...

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