抄改连扩抓审书面表达书面表达六步法书面表达六步法一、审题抄改连扩抓审书面表达3审:审文体审要求审人称2007浙江高考在英语课堂上，你喜欢老师授课时只用英语还是英语、汉语兼用。请你围绕“HowdoyoupreferyourEnglishclassestobetaught?InEnglishonly,orinbothEnglishandChinese?”这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文．授课形式一：只用英语授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用优点：有助于提高听说能力等…缺憾：不易听懂等…结论：…优点：易于理解等…缺憾：英语氛围不浓等…结论：…注意：1.词数100---120,短文开头已给出(不计词数).2.参考词汇:atmosphere氛围IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtin…审文体：审要求：审人称：议论文根据所给要点，选择一种授课形式．提论点，论据，论证过程第一人称某考生IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtinbothEnglishandChinese.NowinourEnglishclasses,withhowtobetaughtwehavetwochoices:InEnglishonly,orinbothEnglishandChinese,andit’sallhasit’sadvantagesanddisadvantages.IfinEnglishonly,canmakeourlisteningandspeakingmoregood,andwhatworse,wewillhardtounderstandourclass.ButifinbothEnglishandChinese,alsounderstandwillbemoreeasily,theEnglishatmosphereislessthaninEnglishonly.Inmyopinion,westudyEnglishtounderstanditisthemostimportant.Afterwestudyandunderstanditgood,listeningorspeakingwillbeeasy.SoIthinkmyEnglishclassestobetaughtinbothEnglishandChinesewillbemorebetter.书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为Whathappened?抄改连扩抓审书面表达时下，各类电视节目广泛使用短信参与方式，对此人们评价不一。请你对此现象向21stCentury投稿，谈谈个人看法：态度一态度二你的观点给观众提供了更多的参与机会控制不当，节目品位无法保证？给媒体带来更多收益短信费用过高，观众易生反感迎合年轻人对新事物的追求沉溺于此，浪费精力要求:1．词数：120词左右。2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.Practice:1.提供机会2.带来收益3.迎合追求4.保证品位5.产生反感6.浪费精力7.你的观点offerchancesbringinprofits/benefitfromappealtotheneedsofensurethetastefeelbad/bored/annoyedwastetimeandenergytakeacriticalattitude列出要点书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Whodidwhat?抄改连扩抓审书面表达1offerchancesAudiencesareofferedmorechancestoparticipateintheliveprograms.2bringinprofits/benefitfromTheybringinprofitstothemassmedia.3appealtotheneedsofTheyappealtotheneedsoftheyoungpeople.4ensurethetaste4ensurethetasteWecannotensurethetasteoftheWecannotensurethetasteoftheprogramsifshortmessagesareoutofprogramsifshortmessagesareoutofcontrol.control.5feelbad/bored/annoyed5feelbad/bored/annoyedTheycostalotandmaketheaudiencesTheycostalotandmaketheaudiencesfeelbored.feelbored.6wastetimeandenergy6wastetimeandenergyItwillbeawasteoftimeandenergyifItwillbeawasteoftimeandenergyiftheyoungareaddictedtothem.theyoungareaddictedtothem.7takeacriticalattitude7takeacriticalattitudeInmyopinionweshouldtakeacriticalattitudetowardsshortmessages.书面表达六步法四、连句成文正确使用过渡词，使行文流畅。并注意段与段的衔接。抄改连扩抓审书面表达a.表示列举和顺序用firstly,secondly,last,then,finally,next,suchas，afterthatb.表示意义增补和引申用also,besides,aboveall,what’smore/what’sworsec.表示结果用so,therefore,asaresult,so…thatd.表示意义转折用instead,however,bute.表示解释说明用inotherwords,thatistosayf.表示概括和总结用inone/aword,inall,asweknowg.表示时间顺序用now,atfirst,when,afterh.表示并列关系用or,and,also,too,i.表示条件关系用as(so)longas,if,unlessj.表示举例用forexample,forinstance,suchask.表示让步关系用though,evenif,however,as1.过好行文逻辑关ApassagewithoutconnectorsD...
