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2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲：刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍GeneralIntroduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task1andTask2A类和G类的区别：task2议论文task1A：图表作文G：书信评分：以Task2为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：VocabularyandSentenceStructure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments,IdeasandEvidence(论证，论点和论据)CommunicativeQuality(交流质量)VocabularyandSentenceStructure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词Theproblembecomesworsebythepooreffectswemade.Theproblemwascompoundedduetotheineffectivemeasureswehadtaken.Theyclaimthatsportsleadtocompetitionratherthancooperationisonlyanincorrectargument.Theclaimthatsportsleadtocompetitionratherthancooperationisonlyalameargument.PeoplefaceviolenceandcrimesonTVandfilmseveryday.PeoplearebombardedbyviolenceandcrimesonTVandfilmseveryday.Thekindofgrowthmayleadtoverybadresults.Thekindofgrowthmayleadtodireconsequences.consequence:far-reaching（深远的）,profound（深刻的）,adverse（不利的）,catastrophic（灾难的）,damaging（破坏性的）,devastating（破坏性的）,dire（可怕的）,disastrous（灾难的）,fatal（致命的）,tragic（悲惨的）,severe1（严重的）,2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothersenjoythesamerightforcareeradvancementasfathersdo.Mothersarejustasentitledtocareeradvancementasfathers.Mothersareempoweredtocareeradvancementasfathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句：Chinaisthelargestdevelopingcountryandisenjoyingrapideconomicgrowth.Asaresult,inthestreetsofmajorcitiesinChina,therearethousandsofvehiclesofallkinds.Asthelargestdevelopingcountry,Chinaisenjoyingrapideconomicgrowth,theevidenceofwhichcanbeseeninallmajorcitieswhosestreetsareteemingwiththousandsofvehiclesofallkinds.倒装句：Youngpeoplearesoimpulsiveandeasilyinfluencedthattheyareconstantlytrickedbyadvertisementinallformsofmedia.Impulsiveandeasilyinfluencedasyoungpeopleare,theyareconstantlytrickedbyadvertisementinallformsofmedia.伴随状语：Itiscommonnowforkidstospendsixandahalfdaysinschooleachweekbecausetheyhavetositthroughoneextraclassafteranother.Itiscommonforkidstospendsixandahalfdaysinschooleachweek,sittingthroughoneextraclassafteranother.设问句：Evenifmachinetranslationwereabletoeradicateallthelanguagebarriersbetweenpeoples,learningforeignlanguagesstillmakesense.Evenifmachinetranslationwereabletoeradicateallthelanguagebarriersbetweenpeople,wouldtherebenopointinlearningforeignlanguages?Bynomeans.Arguments,IdeasandEvidence(论证，论点和论据)Somepeoplethinkthatinordertoimprovethequalityofeducation,highschoolstudentsshouldbeencouragedtoevaluateandcriticizetheirteachers,butotherpeoplemaintainthatsuchevaluationandcriticismmaycauselossofrespectforteachersanddiscipline.Whatdoyouthink?有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。请给出你的看法？学生评价老师的理由：1.通过评估，老师可以知道学生究竟想些什么、需要什么Ifstudentsarenotallowedtoevaluateorcriticizetheteachers,itishardfortheteacherstofindoutwhatthestudentsthinkorwhattheyneed.2.评价和批评本身也是一种有效的交流方式Evaluationandcriticismarethemselveseffectiveformsofcommunication3.听取学生的真实意见和想法，教师自己也能够受益匪浅Teacherswillbenefitalotwhentheirmindsareopentotheideasandhonestopinionsoftheyoungsters.高分作文两个注意事项：1．论据尽可能新颖...