2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲:刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分:7分或7分以上第一节的内容:1.雅思写作的整体介绍2.高分写作的要求3.解决问题的方案4.课程的总览一.雅思写作的整体介绍GeneralIntroduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task1andTask2A类和G类的区别:task2议论文task1A:图表作文G:书信评分:以Task2为主二:高分写作的要求评分标准:VocabularyandSentenceStructure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments,IdeasandEvidence(论证,论点和论据)CommunicativeQuality(交流质量)VocabularyandSentenceStructure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词Theproblembecomesworsebythepooreffectswemade.Theproblemwascompoundedduetotheineffectivemeasureswehadtaken.Theyclaimthatsportsleadtocompetitionratherthancooperationisonlyanincorrectargument.Theclaimthatsportsleadtocompetitionratherthancooperationisonlyalameargument.PeoplefaceviolenceandcrimesonTVandfilmseveryday.PeoplearebombardedbyviolenceandcrimesonTVandfilmseveryday.Thekindofgrowthmayleadtoverybadresults.Thekindofgrowthmayleadtodireconsequences.consequence:far-reaching(深远的),profound(深刻的),adverse(不利的),catastrophic(灾难的),damaging(破坏性的),devastating(破坏性的),dire(可怕的),disastrous(灾难的),fatal(致命的),tragic(悲惨的),severe1(严重的),2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothersenjoythesamerightforcareeradvancementasfathersdo.Mothersarejustasentitledtocareeradvancementasfathers.Mothersareempoweredtocareeradvancementasfathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句:Chinaisthelargestdevelopingcountryandisenjoyingrapideconomicgrowth.Asaresult,inthestreetsofmajorcitiesinChina,therearethousandsofvehiclesofallkinds.Asthelargestdevelopingcountry,Chinaisenjoyingrapideconomicgrowth,theevidenceofwhichcanbeseeninallmajorcitieswhosestreetsareteemingwiththousandsofvehiclesofallkinds.倒装句:Youngpeoplearesoimpulsiveandeasilyinfluencedthattheyareconstantlytrickedbyadvertisementinallformsofmedia.Impulsiveandeasilyinfluencedasyoungpeopleare,theyareconstantlytrickedbyadvertisementinallformsofmedia.伴随状语:Itiscommonnowforkidstospendsixandahalfdaysinschooleachweekbecausetheyhavetositthroughoneextraclassafteranother.Itiscommonforkidstospendsixandahalfdaysinschooleachweek,sittingthroughoneextraclassafteranother.设问句:Evenifmachinetranslationwereabletoeradicateallthelanguagebarriersbetweenpeoples,learningforeignlanguagesstillmakesense.Evenifmachinetranslationwereabletoeradicateallthelanguagebarriersbetweenpeople,wouldtherebenopointinlearningforeignlanguages?Bynomeans.Arguments,IdeasandEvidence(论证,论点和论据)Somepeoplethinkthatinordertoimprovethequalityofeducation,highschoolstudentsshouldbeencouragedtoevaluateandcriticizetheirteachers,butotherpeoplemaintainthatsuchevaluationandcriticismmaycauselossofrespectforteachersanddiscipline.Whatdoyouthink?有人认为,为了提高教育质量,我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估;别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。请给出你的看法?学生评价老师的理由:1.通过评估,老师可以知道学生究竟想些什么、需要什么Ifstudentsarenotallowedtoevaluateorcriticizetheteachers,itishardfortheteacherstofindoutwhatthestudentsthinkorwhattheyneed.2.评价和批评本身也是一种有效的交流方式Evaluationandcriticismarethemselveseffectiveformsofcommunication3.听取学生的真实意见和想法,教师自己也能够受益匪浅Teacherswillbenefitalotwhentheirmindsareopentotheideasandhonestopinionsoftheyoungsters.高分作文两个注意事项:1.论据尽可能新颖...