高三书面表达评讲高二政治江苏省石庄高级中学试题•近来湖南卫视策划的”超级女生”节目热播,在很多观众特别是中学生中引起了很大的反响,上周末你班也为此展开了一场讨论。•观点支持者•1.给一些平凡却爱唱歌的女孩子提供了一个展示才华的舞台•2.增强了她们的竞争意识•反对者•1.花费了太多的时间和精力•2.因为不能集中精力学习,对她们未来自身的发展不利你的观点•注意:1.行文应连贯,内容应完整;•2.题目和开头语已经给出;•3.词数100左右。•SuperGirls’Voice•Recentlymanypeopleespeciallyhighschoolstudentshavebeenfascinatedbyasingingcompetition“SuperGirls’Voice”,whichisheldbyHunanTVStation•近来湖南卫视策划的”超级女生”节目热播,在很多观众特别是中学生中引起了很大的反响,上周末你班也为此展开了一场讨论。•观点支持者•1.给一些平凡却爱唱歌的女孩子提供了一个展示才华的舞台•2.增强了她们的竞争意识•反对者•1.花费了太多的时间和精力•2.因为不能集中精力学习,对她们未来自身的发展不利你的观点•注意:1.行文应连贯,内容应完整;•2.题目和开头语已经给出;•3.词数100左右。•SuperGirls’Voice•Recentlymanypeopleespeciallyhighschoolstudentshavebeenfascinatedbyasingingcompetition“SuperGirls’Voice”,whichisheldbyHunanTVStation第一步:选择要点•近来湖南卫视策划的”超级女生”节目热播,在很多观众特别是中学生中引起了很大的反响(开头语已经给出)第一步:选择要点•1.上周末我班也为此展开了一场讨论。•2.支持者(的观点)•3.给一些平凡却爱唱歌的女孩子提供了一个展示才华的舞台。•4.增强了她们的竞争意识。•5.反对者(的观点)•6.花费了太多的时间和精力。第一步:选择要点•7.因为不能集中精力学习,对她们未来自身的发展不利。•8.我的观点(根据表达内容进行设想)第二步:简译要点•1.Lastweekendstudentsinourclasshadaheateddiscussionaboutit.•2.supportsb/sth,befor,beinfavourof•3.offerasatgetosomeordinarygirlswholikesinging,showtheirtalents•4.strengthen/develop/improve/increasetheirsenseofcompeting•5.objecttosth/oppose/beopposedto/beagainst•6.taketoomuchtimeandenergy•7.concentrateon/centeron/putone’sheartinot/deveoteonselfto/throwoneselfinto•affect/haveabadeffecton/haveabadinfluenceon/doharmto/beharmfulto•theirfurtherdevelopment/furtherwelfare•8.inmyopinion/inmyeyes/AsfarasI’mconcerned第二步:简译要点•8.Inmyopinion,theactivityisagreatsuccess.Butasstudents,weshouldattachmoreimportanceto/sparenoeffortstostudyatpresent.(一分为二的观点)(比如:节目是成功的,但是作为学生……)•Weshouldtakeareasonableattitudetowardssuchanactivityandtrytokeepabalancebetweenstudyandactivities.(中立的观点)(比如:理智对待这样的活动,作为学生应该做到……两不误)•Impressedbytheirpassiontorea;izetheirdreams,weareinspiredtostudyhardtobeUpergirlsinsomefields。(支持的观点)(比如:受到她们的鼓励,作为学生立志……)第三步:扩展成句•2.Thosewhoareinfavourofthecompetitionthinkhighlyofit/makepositiveremarksonit.•3.Ithasofferedastagetosomeordinarygirlswholikesinging/butwell-singinggirstoshowtheirtalents/makethebestoftheirtalents•4.Ithelpsthemstrengthentheirsenseofcompeting.•5.Thosewhoobjecttoithold/sharethedifferentview•6.Ittakestoomuchtimeandenergy.•7.Becausetheycan’tconcentrateontheirstudy,thatwillhaveabadinfluenceontheirfurtherdevelopment.第四步:连句成篇•搜索有关过渡句及过渡词汇•①有两种不同观点Thereappeartwodifferentopinions.•②而且/除此而外还……/再者/同时•What’smore/Besides/Inaddition/Meanwhile/Inthemeantime/Atthesametime•③另一方面/然而/相反Ontheotherhand/However/Onthecontrary•④更糟糕的是What’sworse/Tomakethingsevenworse...