高中英语复习书面表达作文课件Citylifeorcountrylife•人们经常讨论乡村生活和城市生活，一些人喜欢乡村生活而另一人则喜欢城市生活。请你以LivingintheCountryortheCity为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文。•乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。•城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。•我喜欢的生活和理由。•注意：词数100-120，文章的题目和开头已给出（不计词数）。LivingintheCountryorintheCityPeopleareforevertalkingaboutlivinginthecountryandinthecity.•文体与时态。•抓要点•规定内容•开放内容审题明晰结构（分段）,考虑连接(1)乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。(2)城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。(3)我喜欢的生活和理由(1.2….)。1.(Tobeginwith)MoreoverInadditionAdditionallyFurthermore2.Foronething,Foranother3.Inthefirstplace,Inthesecondplace4.First(ly)Second(ly)Finally段落间连接过渡词Onthecontrary;however;…段落间连接过渡词PersonallyTobehonestTobefrankAsfarasIamconcerned…段落内连接规划表达喜欢的用语---•like•prefertolivein•preferlivingin•enjoylivingin…•bewillingto…•wouldrather…•befondof…•beattractedby…•befascinatedby…避免单一表达表达观点的基本用语---•Somethink…othersthink…•believe….•feel…•claim…•state…•stress•insist…•maintain…避免单一表达规定内容---•空气清新、生活恬静•Theairisfresh/clean.•Lifeisquiet/peaceful.•…enjoygentleway/paceofliving•交通便捷、购物方便•It’seasytogoaround/hereandthere.•Peoplecangofromoneplacetoanotherwithoutmuchdifficulty.•Peoplecanbuyanythingtheywant.•Shoppingisconvenient准确灵活语义不充分不连贯•Somepeopleliketoliveinthecountry.Theairisfreshandclean.Moreover,Lifeisquietandpeaceful.•Others,however,prefertoliveinthecity.Theycangofromoneplacetoanotherwithoutmuchdifficulty.Inaddition,shoppingismuchmoreconvenient.下面段落有什么问题？要点适当拓展---添枝加叶1.Theairisfresh.Obviously,theairthereismuchfresherthanthatinthecity.Theyclaimthattheairthereisfresherasthereislesspollution.Theythinkthattheairthereisfreshersothattheycanrelaxthemselvesbothphysicallyandmentally.2.Lifeisquietandpeaceful.Theyinsistthatlifeisquietandpeaceful,whichisbeneficialforgoodhealth.尝试适当拓展以下要点It’seasytogoaround.Theyfeelit’seasytogoaroundas….Theybelievethatit’seasytogoaroundsothat…Theyclaimthatit’seasytogoaround,which…Theycanbuyanythingtheywant.Theythink(…)theycanbuyanythingtheywant…Haveatry表达开放部分---•learnmoresocialskills(gettingalongwithdifferentkindsofpeople)•broadenourviews(…)•makemylifemorecolorful(…)•receivemedicalcaremoreeasily(…)•getbettereducation(…)•…brainstormideas富有思想精选能表达好且出彩的两到三点抄写•字迹清楚，卷面零涂改。•不用改正液、透明胶带。•注意大小写，注意分段。•不超边框，不随意换行。课堂小结•审题•规划•表达相同语义•表达规定部分内容•表达开放部分内容•抄写•抓要点•段落和连接•避免单一•准确灵活，适当拓展•富有思想，精选要点•卷面整洁清楚assignment•Writethepassageoutandcopyitdownasneatlyandclearlyaspossible.段落组织•1、写好主题句。•Personally,Iamfascinatedbycitylife.•2、围绕主题句展开2或3点。•两点连接词用：•?•三点用：•first(firstly),second(secondly),finally(mostimportantly)•3、精选两点或三点理由。总—分1---分2…
