佳作赏析开放式——提示类眼下，大家都在倡导诚信，呼唤诚信，有人甚至提出了政府诚信，就连高考也要签署诚信协议，难道中国已进入一个诚信危机的时代？请就这个话题写一篇100词左右的短文。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________上一页1．话题特点：开放式提示类作文只给出主题、两三点提示或一段素材，然后由考生在此基础上充分发挥想象力，自由创作。这样就对考生的能力要求更高，考查也更全面。它不仅考查考生的书面语言表达能力，语言组织能力，而且考查考生的逻辑思维能力，发散思维能力，丰富的想象力以及多角度考虑问题的创作思维能力。上一页2．写好这类作文要注意：(1)认真审题。把握要求，找准提示语中的关键句，确定文章的中心思想。(2)依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章脉略。(3)准确定位人称、时态，遣词造句要扬长避短。(4)明确写作内容：首先明确主题；然后根据主题构建文章的结构，即写作提纲；最后在写作过程中做到突出主题、层次分明。上一页3．常用的表达句式：(1)主题句句式：Everyoneknowsthat...Withtheadvanceofscienceandtechnology...It'simportantthatsb.should＋v....There'snodoubtthat...(2)承接句句式：Wehavereasonstobelievethat...Thatistosay.../Thatis.../Namely...However，it'sapitythat...(3)结论句句式：Thus，thisisthereasonthat...Therefore，weshouldrealizethat...Whatkindofpersoncanbetrusted？Andwhatkindofsocietycanbeadmired？Anhonestpersonandanhonestworld!Honestyis“gold”intherelationshipbetweenpeople.Everyoneenjoysworkingwithanhonestpersonwhilenoonelovestomakefriendswithadishonestone.Honestyisthebestpolicy，anditisasimplerulethatanhonestbusinessmancanhavemorecustomersinthelongrun.Asstudents，yousee，onlywhenwearehonestcanwegainmorebothinknowledge-learningandincharacter-building.Soeveryoneshouldbehonest.上一页本文以设问开头，直奔主题，能引起读者注意，提纲挈领，富有新意。紧扣中心，论述条理分明，有理有据，且能首尾照应。使用连词while形成了良好的对比关系；it作形式主语的结构以及only引导状语从句的倒装结构都丰富了句型的应用；“both...and...”和“inthelongrun”的使用也很准确恰当。上一页(1)短语类：makefriendswith...inthelongrunbothinknowledge－learningandincharacter－buidingthebestpolicy(2)句子类：Everyoneenjoysworkingwithanhonestpersonwhilenooneloves......itisasimplerulethatanhonestbusinessmancanhave...Asstudents，yousee，onlywhenwearehonestcanwegainmoreboth...and...习作过关(2010·西工大附中高三模拟)当今社会人人渴望成功，你认为我们应该具有什么样的品质才能走向成功呢？请以“Howcanwesucceedinlife？”为题写一篇英语短文。上一页上一页注意：1.短文标题已写好，不计入总词数。2．词数：100左右。Howcanwesucceedinlife?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Howcanwesucceedinlife?Everybodyiseagerforsuccess.Buthowcanwesucceedinlife？Herearemyopinions：First，wemustbekindandfriendly，whichallowustomakefriendsandsurvivewhereverweare.Second，wemustsetagoalforlife，whichmotivatesustopursueourdreams.Third，wemustbelieveinourselves.Onlywithself－confidencecanweworktowardourgoals.Fourth，weshoulddevelopgoodcharacters，suchasstrongwill，diligence，andperseverance，whichhelpsustoholdontoourdreamswhenwegetintotrouble.Ithinksuccessbelongstothosewhokeepontrying.Solet'stakeactionnow!上一页
