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有的放矢？•1.先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。•2.评分时注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇、语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。•3.拼写与标点是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。•4.如书写较差以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。写作基本功一·书写要规范，字体大方、饱满二.句子要有准确性三.语言要有闪光点四.文章要有流畅性1.Atlast,weshouldbecalm,waitingtherescueteammatestohelpus.2.Don’ttakeaelevatororjumpfromhighbuilding.3.Youmustuseawettoweltocoveryounoseandmouth.4.Therearesomeaccidentshappeneveryday.5.Youshouldkeepclam.6.Itiswrongthattotakealift./\foranyourwhichcalm/Correctthefollowingsentences7.Whenyouarecaughtinfire.8.Youhadbettertocall119atonce.9.Whenfacingwiththefire,youshouldkeepcalm.10.Thisactionenableustogetoutofthefireseasily./facedenables,1.Weshoulddowhateverwecantomakeourselvessafe.（钱倩）2.Itisunwisetotakeanelevatororjumpfromthehighbuild.（俏璐）3.Thereisnodoubtthatyoumustmakeeveryefforttotellothersyouareindanger.（巧琴）4.Dangerousasyouare,youmustkeepcalm.（叶晨）5.Herearesomepointsthatmayhelpyouwhenyouareindangeroffire.（舒颖）6.Don’tusetheelevator,oryouwillgetintoaworsesituation.（笑航）Somewonderfulsentencesfromourhomework:7.Thekeytoescapingfromthefiresistokeepcalm.（慧君）8.Itisyoursafetythatisthemostimportant.（淑萍）9.Weshouldmakeeveryefforttogetawayfromthefirequickly,forourlifeismoreimportantthananythingelse.（莹婷）10.Jumpingfromthehighbuildingisnotagoodidea.Sodangerousisitthatitwillmakeyoudie.（美娟）11.Whatsthemostimportantisthatweshouldcall119immediately.Onlyinthiswaycanwedealwiththefireassoonaspossible.（倪丽丽）步骤1审题（时态，人称，分段）步骤2罗列要点（化繁为简）步骤3组句成文(连贯性-关联词)步骤4步骤5抄写检查具体怎样写文章书面表达为了普及“急救知识”，你所在的班级最近举办了一次急救知识大讨论。现请你根据以下要点以“FirstAidinFires”为题写一篇文章，说明发生火灾时要注意的几点事项，放在学校网站的英文专区里。1.室内有浓烟时，身体尽量低一些，用湿毛巾捂住鼻和口逃出；2.不要乘坐电梯或从高层跳下；3.你自己还有什么好的建议。注意：1.词数100—120；2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。了解火灾中急救知识的重要性1.室内有浓烟时，身体尽量低一些，用湿毛巾捂住鼻和口逃出；2.不要乘坐电梯或从高层跳下；3.你自己还有什么好的建议。Paragraph1Paragraph2Asweallknow,firstaidinfiresisofimportance,soweshouldhaveagreatknowledgeofit,whichmayhelpusescapefromfires.Whencaughtinafire,weshouldn’tpanic.Firstly,weshouldcall119andreportthefireatonce.Whentheroomisfullofthicksmoke,weshouldkeepclosetotheground,usingawettoweltocoverourmouthandnose.Secondly,itisunwisetotakealiftorjumpfromthehighbuilding.Wecanfastenropestosomethingthat’sfixedinsidethebuildingandthenslidedowntheropes.Thirdly,don’ttakeanythingwithus.Weshouldmakeeveryefforttogetawayfromthefireasquicklyaswecan.Afterall,ourlifeismoreimportant.—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————1.书写好一般有待于提高2.审题时态人称分段3.要点齐漏（指出具体哪一点）4.病句几处5.闪光点几处6.文章流畅性好一般差7.总分————HomeworkHomework25假如你是李明，你的朋友Tom在学习和生活中遇到一些令人烦心的事。请你根据下面的信息给他写一封信，阐述你对此事的看法。注意：1.对所给要点不要简单翻译，应有适当的发挥；2.词数120左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不记入总词数。烦恼对策你的建议1.与朋友相处时，产生小矛盾；2.室友吵闹，无法入睡；3.患得患失，考试犯错。1.人无完人，体谅他人；2.与室友谈心沟通，无法解决可以向老师求助。1…….2….…（至少两点）Homework