Task-writing记叙文Aguidetotask-writing(一):原文文体记叙文需要我们写的文体:记叙文(叙述类文章写作模板)：1.Title（标题）(2分)2.Sumup（概要）(30wordsorso)(5分)3.过渡句(3分)4.叙述的故事(10分)5.结束的段落(点明主题)(5分)一Whatshouldyoupayattentiontowhenwritingatitle?I使用名词短语或一句话作标题II标题的每一个词的首字母要大写，除了介词和冠词III标题最好不要超过12个词IV参考要写的中文提示安标题10.PatienceIsNecessary4.TheKeytoSuccess─Patience5.HowImportantPatienceIs!6.PatienceLeadsto/ResultsinSuccess7.OurLifeNeedsPatience8.Be/KeepPatient9.DoEverythingPatientlyWhat’sthetitlethatweshoulduse?1.PatienceIstheSecretofSuccess2.PatienceIsImportant3.TheImportanceofPatience1.主要使用原文的词进行原文的概述.不要包含个人观点2.用第三人称描述3词汇控制在20—40词左右二Whatshouldyoupayattentiontowhenwritingasummary?故事性阅读材料，应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么，不能拖泥带水，而且最好讲述该故事给出的启示或其中的一个道理。Skill:Combinationoffiveelements要素串联法WhatWhoWhenWhereWhattolearnwastaughtalessonbyanoldmanthewriterandanoldmanwhengoingfishingonthebankofthelakePatienceisimportant.Patienceisthesecretofsuccess.Youmaybeginlikethese:1.Thepassageisaboutthewriter’sunforgettablelessonfromanoldman.2.Thewritertellsusabouthisunforgettablelessonfromanoldman.3.Thestoryisaboutthewriterwhowastaughtanunforgettablelessonbyanoldman.4.Theauthortellsusthathewastaughtanunforgettablelessonbyanoldman.Summary:Thestoryisaboutanunforgettablelessonofthewriterfromanoldmanwhilefishingonthebankofthelake,throughwhichthewriterrealizedpatiencewasveryimportantandthatitwasthesecretofsuccess.(39words)Possibleversion三.Howtowriteatransitionalsentence（过渡句）1.Ihadasimilarexperienceatonetime,too.2.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ihaveasimilarexperience.3.Ialsohaveasimilarexperience.Youmaywritelikethese:Showgoodtransitionalsentencesorparagraphs:1.Itoccurstomethatasimilarstoryofminehappened3yearsagoandtaughtmealesson.(19words）2.Likethewriter,Ialsohaveanunforgettableexperiencethattaughtmetokeeppatient.(15words）四Makeupyoursimilarstory:Skill:Combinationoffiveelements要素串联法WhatWhoWhenWhereWhattolearnTakewaitingforabusforexample:waitedforabusIwhengoingtoschoolatthebusstopPatienceisimportantIhaveasimilarexperience.OnceIwaitedforthebusatthestopfor30minutes,nobuscame.Icouldn’twaitanylongeranddecidedtowalktoschool.ButnosoonerhadIleftthanthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminute,Iwouldhavecaughtit.IfIwantedtotakethenextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforanother30minutes.OnlythendidIrealizetheimportanceofpatience.Beingimpatientwillwastealltheeffortsthatwehavemade.Patiencealsoplaysanimportantpartinourstudyandwork.Withitwecanachievegreater.(110words)五Howtowriteanendingparagraph２.Allinall,patienceisveryimportant.Everyoneshouldhavepatiencetodoeverything.(１４words)1.Inmyopinion,withoutpatience,wemaymissalotofsuccessfulchancesinourlife.Soweshouldtryourbesttobuildthegoodofpatience.(29words）(Pointoutthemainidea)——两三句话Showgoodendingparagraphs:Possibleversion:Now,wheneverIamtolosemypatience,I’llthinkoftheexperienceofwaitingforabus.(18words)3.Frommyownexperience,Ithinkpatiencecanhelpusovercomethedifficultiesinourlivesandstudies.Soweshouldbepatientwhateverwedo.(26words）Possibleversion:PatienceisthesecretofsuccessThestoryisaboutanunforgettablelessonofthewriterfromanoldmanwhilefishingonthebankofthelake,throughwhichthewriterrealizedpatiencewasveryimportantandthatitwasthesecretofsuccess.(39words)Ihaveasimilarexperience.OnceIwaitedforthebusatthestopfor30minutes,nobuscame.Icouldn’twaitanylongeranddecidedtowalktoschool.ButnosoonerhadIleftthanthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminute,Iwouldhavecaughtit.IfIwantedtotakethenextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforanother30minutes.OnlythendidIrealizetheimportanceofpatience.Beingimpatientwillwastealltheeffortsthatwehavemade.Patiencealsoplaysanimportantpartinourstudyandwork.Withitwecanachievegreater.(110words)Now,wheneverIamtolosemypatience,I’llthinkoftheexperienceofwaitingforabus.(18words)(167words)Thanks
