Unit16CommunicationWorkshopUsethefollowinggivenwordstomakeupashortstoryWarm-upbus,wait,walk,hot,teacher,remind,competition,prepare,last,tearReadingReadthethreedraftsofastudent’scompositiononthetopicADayWhenEverythingWentWrong.Decidewhichoneisthemostinteresting.Thinkabouthowthewriter:●attractstheattentionofthereader.●showstheorderofevents.●sharesfeelingswiththereader.●usesvividlanguagetomakethewritingmoreinteresting.May24thwasabadday.Thedayeverythingwentwrongwasmay24th.May24th,2005willliveinmymindforever.HowthewriterattractstheattentionofthereaderHowthewritershowstheorderofeventsBecausetheschoolbusdidnot…First,Ihadtowait30minutesfortheschoolbus…ThedaystartedtogowrongtheinstantIlefthome.Atschool,Mr.fan…ThenextproblemhappenedwhenIarrivedatschool.Butthetroublewasonlyjustbeginning.WhenIgotintobedthatnight,I…ThelastproblemofthisterribledayhappenedwhenIgotintoEventhen,mytroubleswerenotover.AsIgotintobed,…Thiswasabigmistake!…andyoucanimaginehowIfeltbythetime.Whataclumsyendtoanawfulday!HowthewritersharesfeelingswiththereaderHowthewriterusedvividlanguagetomakethewritingmoreinterestingItwashotandtiresome.Thedaywashotandtiring.Thesunwasalreadyboilinghot…Mr.fan,theEnglishteacherremindedmeofthe…Thissurprisedme…Mr.fan,theEnglishteacher,alargebutfriendlyman,gavemeanastysurprise.Heremindedmeinhisloudvoicethat…AsIclimbedupthestairstotheclassroom,Iheardaboomingvoicebehindme.Ifeltawkwardandhadtolookdownatmybookduringthecompetition.TherewasonlyalittleapplausewhenIleftthestage.TherewasnotimetopracticeatlunchtimeandIreadfrommybookinsteadofrecitingthepoems.AsIleftthestage,therewasonlysomequietapplause.IwasnotsurprisedwhenIcamelastinthecompetition.Itried,andfailedtopracticeduringthelunchbreak.Theresult?Icouldn’trememberanyofthepoemsandhadtokeeplookingdownatmybook.ThemoreIlookeddown,thereddermyfacebecame.Ifelttenseanddizzy.WhenIleftthestagepeopledidn’tapplaudveryloudlyanditcameasnosurprisethatIwaslastinthecompetition.layoutintroductionbeginningofthenarrativeconclusiondevelopmentofthenarrativeMakedraftAandBmoreinterestingbyreplacingsomephraseswithmorecolorfullanguage.1.reallysleepy2.wasaterribleshock3.burningwithshame4.Thefirstsignofthingstocomewas5.mytroublesonlygotworse6.thefinalhorrorcamePredictanswersbeforelisteningEurydiceandOrpheuslovedeachother.Oneday,theywentout,andEurydicefellasleepunderanappletree…ThekingofFairiestookheraway,andOrpheusfeltsadandleftthepalacewiththeharp.oneday,hefollowedagroupofpeopleinthewoods,andcametothepalaceofthekingofFairies.HeplayedtheharpandthekingofFairiespromisedhimanything.HetookEurydiceawayandlivedahappylife.
