书面表达书面表达常见错误常见错误 100100 例例 11 写作错误两类写作错误两类（（ 11 ） 表层错） 表层错语言错误语言错误 : : 语法和词汇错误语法和词汇错误1 In China 1 In China ，， there are many people who there are many people who Know JapaneseKnow Japanese ，， but less of them are but less of them are fluent speakersfluent speakers22 Both written English and spoken EnglishBoth written English and spoken Englishis importantis important3 My brother beated me in the game3 My brother beated me in the game4 That day was a important day to 4 That day was a important day to RememberRemember5 At the age of ten5 At the age of ten ，， his brother attended his brother attended SchoolSchool6 She went to meet with a foreigner 6 She went to meet with a foreigner after classafter class7 We should study hard to catch more 7 We should study hard to catch more KnowledgeKnowledge还常犯错误还常犯错误Cutted –cut favour---flavourCutted –cut favour---flavourRised---rose uncareful---carelessRised---rose uncareful---carelessPartwork---part-time jobPartwork---part-time jobEnlarge one’s eyewide—broad one’s mindEnlarge one’s eyewide—broad one’s mind（（ 22 ） 深层错） 深层错语篇和语用错语篇和语用错----You seem to have lost your way----You seem to have lost your way 。。 Are you Are you looking for somethinglooking for something ？？-------Yes-------Yes 。。 I am looking for Sunny StreetI am looking for Sunny Street画线部分应为 画线部分应为 Need helpNeed help ？？ /what can I do for you/what can I do for you ？？Can I help youCan I help you ？？2 2 写作错误起因写作错误起因（（ 11 ）语际错误（干扰和迁移））语际错误（干扰和迁移）（（ 22 ）语内错误）语内错误3 3 改错方法两类改错方法两类 （（ 11 ） 有效错误改正） 有效错误改正反馈（ 反馈（ feedbackfeedback ））...
