Communication WorkshopEvents in My lifeAppreciate the compositions and think about the following aspects while reading.Think about how the writer:●attracts the attention of the reader.● shows the order of events. ● shares feelings with the reader. ● uses vivid language to make the writing more interesting.How the writer attracts the attention of the readerMay 24th was a bad day. The day everything went wrong was may 24th.May 24th, 2005 will live in my mind forever.How the writer shows the order of eventsBecause the school bus did not …First, I had to wait 30 minutes for the school bus…The day started to go wrong the instant I left home.At school, Mr. fan …The next problem happened when I arrived at school.But the trouble was only just beginning.When I got into bed that night, I …The last problem of this terrible day happened when I got intoEven then, my troubles were not over. As I got into bed, …How the writer shares feelings with the readerThis was a big mistake!…and you can imagine how I felt by the time.What a clumsy end to an awful day!How the writer used vivid language to make the writing more interestingIt was hot and tiresome. The day was hot and tiring.The sun was already boiling hot…Mr. fan, the English teacher reminded me of the… This surprised me… Mr. fan, the English teacher, a large but friendly man, gave me a nasty surprise. He reminded me in his loud voice that … As I climbed up the stairs to the classroom, I heard a booming voice behind me. I felt awkward and had to look down at my book during the competition. There was only a little applause when I left the stage.There was no time to practice at lunch time and I read from my book instead of reciting the poems. As I left the stage, there was only some quiet applause. I was not surprised when I came last in the competition.I tried, and failed to practice during the lunch break . The result? I couldn’t remember any of the poems and had to keep looking down at my book. The more I looked down, the redder my face became. I felt tense and dizzy. When I left the stage people didn’t applaud very loudly and it came as no surprise that I was last in the competition.layoutintroductionbeginning of the narrativeconclusiondevelopment of the narrativeWrite about a memorable day or event in your life.
