写作进阶提升之六 写作进阶提升—— 书面表达常见错误及对策常见错误有以下几个方面：1. 审题错误 抓不住文章的所要写的要点例文 （ 1 ）中国学生通常过生日的方式，如生日聚会、生日礼物、生日祝福等；（ 2 ）我认为有意义的庆祝方式以及这样做的目的或理由。 Chinese Birthday First let me show you something about the Chinese birthday. Usually it includes three parts: party, gift and good rewards. On the birthday, we often wear our favorite clothes , which makes us very happy. We also will organize a birthday party in the evening. At the party, we’ll prepare lots of delicious foods, especially the birthday cake. Then we will eat the cake. We sing and dance together. At last, we’ll take the gift to the person who was born on that day. In the gift there will be a card, on which are our best wishes.2. 格式错误 不熟悉常见应用文的格式 需要熟练掌握的应用文有：书信、日记、通知（分书面通知和口头通知）Receiver’s addressDateDear …,Body of the letter…Sincerely/Truly Yours,Writer’s nameSaturday, February 14th. 2007, Sunny The body of the your diary…Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please? / Attention please, everyone. ………That’s all. Thank you!口头通知书面通知 Notice …… Student’s Union 3. 词法错误1) 用词重复如： return back; repeat again; Chinese students in China have our own way to celebrate birthday.2) 用词不当如：把 bring 写成“ take” ，“ get” ，“ fetch” 等把欢迎某人到我校写成 welcome you to visit our school正确的说法是： You are welcome to visit our school. 或 Welcome to our school.3) 词性混淆A. 不及物动词当成及物动词：例如： is happened / is belonged to/ come (to) the city/ return (to) the placeB. 把形容词用作动词如：例如： This will happy the foreign visitors. Please ready a small gift. C. 不可数名词用成可数名词：例如 :make a great pro...
