专题13读后续写句子改写之无灵主语

专题13 读后续写句子提升思维之无灵主语 一、读后续写中无灵主语的运用 赏析: Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Embarrassed, Jenny didn’t say anything. Dead silence suddenly fell. Then came Miss Walker’s voice. “Why is Lee’s watch on your wrist?” Jenny hesitated for a while and decided to tell everybody about the truth. However, thinking of the well-prepared speech, the magic of the watch, she changed her mind. “But Miss Walker, could I give the speech first and then explain?” She made a request in a tone of begging. [70 words] At that, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny’s speech first. Jenny made her way to the platform with every confidence. Words began to flood out of her. “How could she make it? We’ve never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech.” Whispers went around the classroom, and even Miss Walker nodded with approval. Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class. Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth, and especially the magic of the watch. “But it’s just an ordinary watch with no magic”, Lee announced. [80 words] 好句式学习： 1. Embarrassed, Jenny didn’t say anything.形容词作状语，精简高级。后文还有： Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth. 2. Dead silence suddenly fell.无灵主语，有灵谓语动词，高级。形容词 dead 修饰微妙，恰到好处。包括后文多次运用到抽象名词作主语： Words began to flood out of her. Whispers went around the classroom, and even... Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class. 3. Then came Miss Walker’s voice.完全倒装，高级句式。类似的还有： Then 的完全倒装： The chairman came then=>Then came the chairman. Computer was used in teaching then =>Then c...