Unit 5 What an adventure第四课时 Writing——记叙文根据提示，通过买鞋的经历，以第一人称编写一个小故事。词数：80 词左右。一天，我在一家鞋店买了一双皮鞋，店员告诉我这双鞋有“三包”服务。四天后这鞋坏了，我很生气，回到鞋店想要回我的钱。但店员不想赔钱，他说，“三包”就是保留三天。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【分析】本单元的写作重点是记叙文，描述所发生的事情和经历。常见的形式有：故事、传记 、游记、日记、新闻报道等。一、记叙文的写作要素1．要交代清楚五要素的内容，即：where，when，what，who，how。2．事件可按时间或空间顺序叙述。3．时态通常是与过去有关的时态；如果是当前的经常性事件、自然或社会现象，通常用与现在有关的时态。二、记叙文的篇章结构开头(the beginning)——交代必要的背景，如：时间、地点、人物等。中间(the middle)——交代故事情节(事情的主体)。如：事件的发生、发展和前因后果。结尾(the ending)——事情的结果、感想、愿望等(the result or feeling)。三、在记叙文中常用到的连接词First...Then...Next...Finally；Some...Some...Others；The boys...The girls...；Some...the others...The rest of us/them...Ⅰ.用词1．be_worn_out 穿坏的；用旧的2．get_back 取回；要回3．make_sb._astonished 使某人感到震惊 4．compensate v. 赔偿5．keep_one's_promise 遵守诺言Ⅱ.造句1．I asked him why_he_didn't_keep_his_promise.我问他为什么不信守承诺。2．But only four days later the shoes were worn out ，so I was angry and returned to the shop hoping_to_get_back my money.但仅仅过了四天，鞋子就穿破了，所以我很生气，回到店里想要回我的钱。3 ． When he knew I had kept the shoes for four days ， he didn't want to compensate me, which_made_me_astonished.当他知道我的鞋已经买了四天，他不想补偿我，这让我很惊讶。Ⅲ.成篇Three_GuaranteesOne_day_I_bought_a_pair_of_leather_shoes_in_a_shoe_shop.And_the_seller_there_told_me_he_would_have_“three_guarantees”_for_the_shoes._I_left_the_shop_happily._But_only_four_days_later_the_s...
